Here's a few comments on the first installments of my fanfic, to try and
forestall some of your questions.
1. Yes, it starts out kinda slow. But this fic is intended to work a LOT
like the first movie, where only a few battles occur at first, then
more... and more... until eventually there isn't much of Graviton City
left.
2. This thing is a little heavy with the Marvel comics references, but I
couldn't help it, nothing else fit with what I wanted to do. I'll try
and stick some other references in the next few installments.
3. Yes, I plan to continue to write C-ko as an airhead. You expected
something else?
I also have a few other ideas. After I finish this (finish?! God I'm
optimistic!) I'm going to do a sequel in the Vs. Battle universe,
translating my two characters over, and giving A-ko and Kyle a bit of a
past (They were lovers, but didn't part on the best of terms). I also
intend to explain where A-ko got her uniform/outfit. And yes, Maruten is
a dead man (alien... thingie... just what the hell IS he, anyway?)
I also pledge not to start another fic until I at least finish the draft
on this one (uh huh, that's what I said about 'Heart of Glass', too, and
the draft is STILL sitting untouched on my hard drive!)
The Prime Saggitarian,
Alpha Centauri
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