On Fri, 4 Oct 1996 00:35:30 -0400 Michael Chen wrote:
: Herbal Remedy
Aaaaaaargh! PASSION SPICE?!?!?!?!?
Prepare to die.
: So this is a short work that has little character analysis and very little
: in terms of a new plot. So what! I had fun writing this! So enjoy real
: Original Flavor. Heck this story tastes like it was a rehashed Tv
: episodes.....that got mangled in a blender....
Well, since I don't know the Anime, I can just guess as to how
true this was to the "original flavour" of it.
As with your other fic I read, the basic Idea is intriguing (You
seem to like messing with Ranma's mind) - but the fic just rushes
through the plot, exploring nothing in depth, and jumping from
scene to scene without a counterpoint to the happenings.
Sebastian