"WILD STALLION IN THE MIST"
How do you like it so far? I wrote this when I realized that, aside
>from lemon fanfics, no one had ever, to my knowledge, done a serious
fanfic on Ranma and Kasumi as a possible couple. This is probably
because Ranma and Kasumi are almost complete opposite in personality and
style. You've have to be crazy to put them together, hence this fanfic
was born.
I realize Soun is a bit too thoughtful in this fic but I thought taking
this from his point of view would be an interesting change. His
emotional state and stubborness to see the engagement work will remain
the same.
Actually, there is one problem I have with the conversation between
Genma & Soun. This occurs in another fic as well, involving marrying Ranma
to someone else. I haven't read the manga either, so I may be wrong here.
The problem I have is that Ranma isn't forced to marry *AKANE*, but he
is forced to marry a *TENDOU*. That could be Akane, Kasumi, or Nabiki, and
it is irrevelant as to which one, since the heir to the Anything Goes School
of Martial Arts is *RANMA*, not Akane.
Other than that, the story is pretty good, and I'd like to see more.
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Ben Kosse bmk7411@cs.rit.edu
BGC Otaku and worshipper of the Red-Eyed Goddess. Member of ShAS.
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