On Tue, 8 Oct 1996 21:25:33 -0400 Zenki Wrote:
: Goodbye Ranma
: by Michael Chen
: michael.h.chen@yale.edu
This one I liked better than your previous fics. It seems that
you put a lot more time and planning into this one. Even though
it contains one of the things I hate in stories: ancient
prophecies and destiny that rob the characters of their free will.
I realize that your fanfics are based on the Anime, and therefore
your characters are a little more extreme in their reactions than
I would expect. Ryouga, talking himself into helping Ranma,
because it will impress Akane, I don't believe for a second. He
might need an excuse to help, since he would never admit that he
and Ranma are friends of a sort, but *that* logic wouldn't even
convince someone who *wants* to believe in it.
The fight scenes were done in the usual movie manner, i.e.
everybody attacking separate and after each other, instead of as a
team and all at once. I guess it is better for the plot, but they
*are* all martial artists and should know about planning an
Sebastian