Hmm. Well, it's fairly well written, has good descriptive and emotional
writing, and shows a fair bit of research.

   Sadly, it's OOC seven ways from sunday.

   Ranma simply isn't the Seppuku type. He isn't obsessed with the more
rigid forms of honor, he isn't moody or unhappy, and his situation isn't
one where he might feel that only suicide would give him escape and clean
his honor. In short, the central character is acting like someone else.
   
   Aside from that, good fic.

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