Richard Lawson wrote:

This is a reactionary fanfic.  There have been several fanfics that have
bothered me of late.  They disturbed me enough so that I felt I had to
write this.

I'd like your opinion.

It's an excellent piece, as always. ^_^

I'd also like to know what you thought of the ending.  I had intended to
write more, but when I typed the last line, it *felt* right to stop.

Agreed.

 If
it's too abrupt, or if you think I should continue a little further, I
do have some ideas in my head.

Well, a part of me says..."That's the place to stop."
Another part of me says..."More! More!" Your characterizations are so
well done that I want to read more about this realtionship and how it
continues. I want to see Ken and Ranma meet Akane and her boyfriend.
*evil grin*
And there is one more part of me, a little part that I'm shushing
furiously, that really wants to see the Lemon to this...*^_^*

Oh, I did spot one glaring thing:

He remembered telling Komatsu how she comfortable Ranma was with who and what she was.

*gak!!!* um...cut and paste edit nasty?

Laters.

Windlily

(dragoncritter@theCelestialTemple.com)