Subject: [CC] Suds-kun's Review #4 (10/18 - 10/24)
From: Suds-kun
Date: 10/25/1996, 2:26 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Hello all!



Part Four of my e-mail readings, starting with fics from 10-13.



My rating system is based on 'Tea Kettles'

One = Read the intro, a couple more lines and went to the next fic.

Two = Read the fic, looked for the next fic.

Three = Read the fic, liked it. Good Fic.

Four = Great Fic!! Must Read!

Five = If you haven't read this, DO SO NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awsome Fic.



Remember:  THIS IS AN ENJOYMENT SCALE!!!

The more fun I had reading the fic, the greater the number of Tea

Kettles. I'm just assuming that Five Kettles will be a rarity. ;)



I'm also adding a 'dead Ryoga' scale. If you make me depressed with your

fic, you get a 'dead Ryoga'.

(these fics are reviewed by date)

And awaaay we go!



CLAMP: Dreams of A Blue Sky, Part 5

jmondazzi@mail.arc.nasa.gov (Jennifer Mondazzi)

Two Tea Kettles



Ranma: Lost Memories 3

"Entomorph" <ento@powernet.net>

Quick Quote: Oh so now are you going to beat him up, or just feed him

your cooking?

Comment: I got bored while reading this, no idea why.

Two Tea Kettles



Ranma: Worse, Chapter Five

Scott Jamison <majks@cyberx.com>

Quick Quote: "That boy needs professional help."

Quick Quote #2: Ranma stopped laughing.

Comment: Oooo, I like it!

Four Tea Kettles



Ranma: The begining draft of a fic including Ranma and Gargoyles

characters

brenda02@sprynet.com

Quick Quote:  I hope Ranma's OK.

Comment: Started slow, but ended to quick. ;) Yes, put more effort into

it!

Three Tea Kettles



Ranma: Wishing Upon the Same Star" Part 4 Page 2

fcasper <fcasper@yesic.com>

Quick Quote: "Nabiki's not going to like this...."
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: Repost: The Legend of Ranko Part 2

fcasper <fcasper@yesic.com>
Quick Quote: Deal with it.
Comment: Hmmm
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: short fan fic
Ranma: repost short fan fic
Peter Schell <schell@interlog.com>
Quick Quote: Later in a private changing room Nabiki looks over Ranma
with a twing of guilt.
Comment:
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Five Tea Kettles

Ranma: Twilight Existence (beta)
Scott Jamison <majks@cyberx.com>
Quick Quote: I blacked out, just as the words "young sir" were
registering.
Comments: I like this idea!
Three Tea Kettles

[Fanfic]I'm new! Be gentle!
Ranma: Bakamoichigei (Even a Fool Has One Talent) #4!!
by Caryll "Sasquash" Griffin   ô¿ô
Maris McCrabb <mmccrabb@nv-vb.mindspring.com>
(I'm just using this address)
Quick Quote: "Tatsuro you hentai!!"
Two Tea Kettles

An Alternate History of Ranma 1/2: Chapter Three: How did I let myself
be...
Hitomi Ichinohei <hitomi@terminal.autobahn.mb.ca>
Quick Quote: One thing was for sure, she would DEFINITELY avoid having
sex.
Comments: Hmmm. This is going to take some getting used to.
Four Tea Kettles

An Alternate History of Ranma 1/2: Chapter Four: If this is how I have
to get an education...
Hitomi Ichinohei <hitomi@terminal.autobahn.mb.ca>
Quick Quote: I guess I underestimated you Ranma, I thought you'd be like
the other boys.
comments: too short
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: [beta] Bonded chapter 1
Doug Torneden <daneel@flash.net>
Comments: The teaser spoiled me 
Two Tea Kettles

Ranma: Lesson in Love XIII (Part I & II)
Marisa Price <mdp102@york.ac.uk>
Ranma: Lesson in Love XIII (REALLY REALLY revised...)
MD Price <mdp102@york.ac.uk>
A Lesson In Love
Chapter XIII: Forgiveness
Quick Quote: "Well, that wasn't too bad, was it?"
Comments: The revision was VERY well done. Ranma's reaction confused me,
tho'.
Four Tea Kettles

Ranma: Cheap Access to Space
"Yoo C. Chung" <wacko@power1.snu.ac.kr>
Quick Quote: "OK, I'm ready,"
Comments: I wasn't :)
Three Tea Kettles

Sailor Moon: Heart's Ease.
Eric den Biesen <greywolf@eagle.ca>
Quick Quote: "I'm NOT being cruel to you, Hatchling,"
Comments: I _still_ can't understand SM
Two Tea Kettles

Ranma: Revised Nullifier part 2
WebDragon <kmark@odyssey.on.ca>
Four Tea Kettles

SailorMoon: Sailormoon Heretics Part 10
Ifurita <walker@mail.accent.net>
Quick Quotes: "Quiet...just stand here and look feminine." said Michiru.
Comments: Sailormoon Bikini Contest? brrrrrrrrr.
Two Tea Kettles

R1/2-KOR-SM-UY-A!MG!-TM-APCGNN: (sur)Real World pt 4 BETA
RPM - acct 3/5 <rpm39788@Bayou.UH.EDU>
Quick Quote: "Are you..." began Nuku, "a sister of Ranma?"
Comments: My head hurts from all of the scene switching. Besides, it
felt like I was on the set of one of Biles' movies.
Three Tea Kettles

BGC: Apotheosis (2/5) (PG-13)
Chris Davies <cdavies@gpu.srv.ualberta.ca>
Quick Quote: "Silky Doll Lingerie, how may I help you?"
Comments: Still don't understand BGC, *sigh*
Two Tea Kettle

Ranma/DB: Arabian Knigtz (dear God, may it please WORK this time)
"Harold C.Hayes" <hayesman@webspan.net>
Quick Quote: Now, Aisha was quite old, sixteen.
Comments: Read the sentence after the quote ;)
Two Tea Kettles

Ranma: A Window To The Past Chapter 1 (just a sniippet,,,)
"Odie3100" <odie3100@bridge.net>
Quick Quote: Uh.... Uh.... UH!
Comments: Too Short
Two Tea Kettles

Ranma: A Window To The Past: Prologue
"Odie3100" <odie3100@bridge.net>
Quick Quote: She felt the sudden urge to find his lips with her own, but
fought off that feeling.
Comments: Ahh, much better. In fact, pretty good!
Four Tea Kettles

Ranma: A Window To The Past Chapter 1
"Odie3100" <odie3100@bridge.net>
Quick Quote:
"Ididn'tknowyouwereinhereIdidn'tmeantodisturbyouPleasedon'thate-"
Comments: So, when's Part 2 coming out?
Four Tea Kettles

Ranma: A Lesson in Love XIV (Lost Causes) Part I
Ranma: A Lesson in Love XIV (Lost Causes) Part II
Ranma: Notes on A Lesson in Love
Ranma: Lesson in Love XVI PART II (CORRECTED) (READ THIS ONE)
Ranma: Lesson in Love XIV (PLEASE READ)
Ranma: Lesson in Love XIV (REVISED- Final edition)
Ranma: Lesson in Love XIV II (REVISED -final of part II)
Ranma: ;_; PLEASE read me. This means a LOT to me
MD Price <mdp102@york.ac.uk>
Quick Quote: "Difficult my ass," said Ukyou, unsympathetically.
Comments: This quote could very well describe what you went through as
you made your way to the REVISED -final of part II.
Four Tea Kettles

Ranma: "Wishing Upon the Same Star" Part 4 Page 3 of 4
Ranma: "Wishing Upon the Same Star" Part 4 Page 4 of 4 (This is a short
one.)
fcasper <fcasper@yesic.com>
Quick Quote: NO, I DIDN'T HURT ANYONE YOU JACKASS!!!
Comments: Hmm, interesting setups.
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: I hate when I can't think of a title, Chapter 4(draft)
"Zenki" <michael.h.chen@yale.edu>
Quick Quote: "What happened Nabiki?  Did you make a move on Ranma in
front of Akane?"
Comments: Needs a name. OOC barely describes Ranma, Nabiki et al
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: [Lemon] *That* Time of the Month pt.1 
bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Quick Quote: He shuddered, trying not to think about her.
Comments: Here kitty, kitty.
Three Tea Kettles

Soryuden: Dragon Dreams pt. 23 re-edit
Shannon Richmeyer <trichm@iu.net>
Two Tea Kettles

TB/X: Time Immaterial
Monica Shin <monica@pipeline.com>
Two Tea Kettles

Ranma: Chasing the Wind Part 7
"J. Austin Wilde" <jaustin@aloha.net>
Quick Quote: “Something vexes thee, Kuno-baby?"
Comments: Grrrrrrrrrrr. Hurry up with part 8!
Four Tea Kettles

Ranma/SM: Bottom of the Ninth
Ranchan <ranchan@mail.accent.net>
Quick Quote: Ladies and gentlemen, Ryouga Hibiki has left the building.
Two Tea Kettles

Ranma: Lost Memories 4
"Entomorph" <ento@powernet.net>
Quick Quote: He looks up and before him is a giant man eating toe!
Three Tea Kettles


Ranma: Namida no Okonomiyaki
WebDragon <kmark@odyssey.on.ca>
Quick Quote: "Clothes?!  But...", he spluttered.
Comments: Poor Ukyou, *sigh*
Four Tea Kettles

Ranma/AMG: That's 1/2 My Goddess Part V
Scriviner <ebon@i-manila.com.ph>
Quick Quote: The woman couldn't even boil water properly. It was
amazing.
Comments: I was expecting Urd to pop up any moment.
Three Tea Kettles

X: Circle's End
Posted by: Shannon Richmeyer <trichm@iu.net>
For: howailin@singnet.com.sg (Elizabeth How)
Quick Quote: He feels as if something... something... is being torn from
him...
Two Tea Kettles

Ranma: "Wishing Upon the Same Star" Part 5 Page 1
fcasper <fcasper@yesic.com>
Quick Quote: "Yippee Ki Yay Mother...."
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: Kasumi's Guest
Susan Doenime <wendigo@humbug.org.au>
Quick Quote: I have some garbage bags that should do the trick.
Coomments: The comments every other paragraph became quite annoying.
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: [Lemon] [R2096] Undying Love [Final Version]
Caroline Ann Seawright <kunoichi@yoyo.cc.monash.edu.au>
Quick Quote: There was Ratiko and Kim, asleep on the single bed.
Comments: Well, this _was_ a lemon. ;) Hey! An R2096 that _wasn't_
depressing!
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma/AMG: That's 1/2 My Goddess... Repost of Parts 1-4
Scriviner <ebon@i-manila.com.ph>
Quick Quote: "Oh no... was that the client?"
Comments: Makes part V more understandable
Three Tea Kettles

APCCGNN: Facets of Love (second posting)
Richard Lawson <sterman@sprynet.com>
Quick Quote: "It's so... so weird.  You did this with Mama-san?"
Comments: Still a good story
Three Tea Kettles

Ranma: Gaijin in Nerima ... enjoy. ^^;
Caroline Ann Seawright <kunoichi@yoyo.cc.monash.edu.au>
Quick Quote: "Hey, that's my futon! You're not sleeping there!"
Comments: Thish wush gurate, Kun-chan
Fur Kea Tekkles

Thash all for now, I'm shleepy


-- suds-kun (Shaun Schillinger) suds1964@tir.com http://www.geocities.com/TimesSquare/8222/ "THIS time, we didn't forget the graaavy!" Cat & Mouse to Dog