gaffney@iconn.net wrote:
Maison Ikkoku - Now It's Time to Say Goodbye
by Sean Gaffney
Draft 1
WARNING! This fanfic has bits that are *really* nasty! Yes, it has
romance, but if you hate violence (or at least the suggestion of
violence), STAY AWAY!!!
C&C, please.
You call that violent? Kasumi hacking up Genma-panda with a
three-quarter axe was violent. The Kindly Mr. Kouyema double-tapping the
'still-gurgling' Nabiki was violent. This was so abstract and surreal I
had to read it again and wonder what I missed. (Or did Godai poison
everyone and I just didn't catch it?)
That doesn't mean I didn't like it however!
Realistically, this *would* be the only way Kyoko and Godai could get
rid of them without them continuing to ruin the rest of their lives.
Godai gathered up their luggage and began moving it out to the taxi. As
he got back, he saw Kyoko looking around, her eyes watering.
There's a cabbie for a witness to this? Might want to amend that one
somehow.
Godai smiled, fishing out a packet of matches. "Of course." Smiling, he
lit a match, then lit the entire pack, tossing it into Room 1.
As they left, the glowing light that had once been Maison Ikkoku lit up
the sky.
<tear falls from eye>
You realize that with MLs recent offerings: "Kasumi's Guest", "Kasumi
the Axe Murderess", and now your "...Time to Say Goodbye" a new genre of
fic is come into existance:
No it's not a darkfic,
evilfic?
snuff-fic?
You decide...
J. Austin Wilde
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