Heh heh! Great writing notwithstanding, this fic is worth reading just
to see Nabiki totally outmaneuver Cologne! I always figured that if
Cologne couldn't even outwit Ranma (Not exactly the most forethought
prone person on the planet) she wouldn't stand a chance against Nabiki.
And I was right! I especially like how you've made Nabiki into the de
facto hero of this story WITHOUT taking her out of character.

So until next time, ignore all those people griping about the
huge number of Ranma fanfics.  I read all the fanfics that are
posted on the ML, and a lot of the non-Ranma fanfics are good (I
myself am thinking about trying my hand at a Tenchi fanfic), but
Ranma still holds the highest place in my heart.  Please!  Keep
writing!

Krista (aka: the Kapster)

Ahh, I never listen to people griping anyway (I mean, 30+ posts because
someone accidentally posted an old Trojan Horse warning message? Ack!).
although it may be awhile before my 'Heart of Glass' fic comes out
(partially completed) since I am presently working on a project A-ko fic
(More fodder for the Cute Redhead Subroutine!)

Keep writing stuff like this. This little section has now got me good
and hooked on this story.

The Prime Saggitarian,
Alpha Centauri

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