On Tue, 22 Oct 1996 16:13:38 -0400 (EDT) WebDragon said:
: >Sorry, not too much action in this one. I promise it will be the
: >same in part 2. I'm not fond of in-detail descriptions of the
: >act - I just say what happens and let the reader figure the rest
: >out.
:
: *DISAPPOINTED LOOK*
<raises eyebrow>
: You don't have to do in-detail if you don't want to, but more detail
: would certainly be nice.... I go for in-detail, with feelings and
: sensations, but NOT overly vulgar. You've read "Split Personalities", so
: you know what I don't like.....
Well, I'm not quite as upset over _Split Personalities_ as some.
It's not the sex *per se* that angers me, but the fact that there
were a lot of great ideas in that fic that were systematically
sacrificed for the increasing volume of sex. :(
: Overall, good storytelling that pulls the reader along with its
: flow....with humor sprinkled liberally throughout the story.
Thanks. I wanted to do a humourous lemon-ish story that was not
actually *silly*. A lot of Lemons seem to "apologize" for the
sexual contents by being bizarrely silly and unbelievable. I
wanted this to be mainly a *story* whith some lemon and some
sillyness, but neither being the main factor.
: I liked this story, but it
: has NO tearjerker scenes in it! BOO HOO! I love reading tearjerkers...so
: then I can learn from their mistakes or good points - and "Namida no
: Okonomiyaki" is the result.
Haven't seen that one, yet. I'll go look for it in that giant
pile of fanfics I have lurking around on my harddisk.
: So, Shampoo/Neko/Werecat looks like a human/cat hybrid? With a tail
: too? I dunno....I sorta prefer au naturelle (ie. Shampoo as she is, human,
: w/o clothing preferably).
Personally, I am no fan of Shampoo and she won't be treated too
kindly in part 2.
: Have Ranma turn into a girl. Maybe Shapoo/neko/werecat would think twice
: about jumping all over Ranma-chan then....
She sure showed that with Kasumi, didn't she? :P~~
: >There is a god-awful bilingual pun in this one, but you have to
: >know some German to see it. Apologies to all who do - and you get
: >five bonus points from me for perceptiveness.
:
: I missed it. What is it, o enlightened one?
I'm not quite sure whether I should drag this particular shaggy
dog out in the open. I'll just say that it's a pun on a dirty
German phrase. And it's really awful.
Sebastian