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To: mdp102@york.ac.uk
Subject: Re: Notes on A Lesson in Love
Cc: fanfic@fanfic.com

Why did I have Ranma be so wishy washy in Part XIII?
Because he totally fell apart in the last manga when
his hands were frozen with Saffron's goo and he 
thought that Akane was dead. He also tweaked out
when he thought she was dead after he returned her
to human size. If you haven't read the final Ranma
manga, then you probably don't know what I mean, and
I suggest that you go to the Ranma Universe page
and read the manga synopsis.

Yes, he was upset, but he did not fall apart the way you 
characterised him.  You made him a blathering idiot, crying and 
hurting Akane (shaking her to death).  Even in the last volume (I 
own it by the way, not just the synopsis) he did not flip out.  He 
zoned out, but did not become stupid.  And where did Ryouga become 
so calm from?  In the last volume he proceeded to punch Ranma in 
the face when he zoned out. Real calm.  Oh well.  Read 14, has to 
be one of the best endings (almost ending) to a story I have ever 
read.  It is true when people say that you (Marisa) are the only 
one who makes Ryouga and Ukyou seem right.  Carry on, we faithfully 
wait your next installment.

Yours to command (if it deals with editing your stories, I love 
advanced copies),


Trunks O'Byrne

"It'll never work...never, never, never." The future sensei of the
Anything Goes Martial Arts