From: "Guardian Jupiter" <Marc_Wang@msn.com>

Excellent.  Though a good judge of fanfics I'm not, I really liked this.
It's simple, honest, and direct, and all the characters are "in
character".  Good emotional touches.  (I especially liked that bit at the
end.)  Fair portrayal of Ukyo as well.  (Although as an Ukyo fan, I'm a
bit slanted... ;)  )  Prose is decent, though I believe I found a few
errors here and there.

        Thanks!  The 'bit' at the end took me a half hour to figure out how
to make it ironic and bittersweet.....simplicity works wonders.

Nice "slice of life" fanfic.  No earthshaking developments, but the details

are what make this story good.  Guess that's all I have to say.  ;)

        Earthshaking developments belong to the realm of the epic fics.  I
just wanted to write a [TJ], or Tear Jerker.  
                                Thanks for your C&C!

On another note....

        Hey, kapster!  Did I already C&C your part 6 of Hearts of Ice?  Tell
me if I didn't already....I'm pretty sure I did.
        
        Oh, and I heard you like [TJ]'s.  Namida no Okonomiyaki is for you,
then.