Subject: Lesson in Love XIV (PLEASE READ)
From: MD Price
Date: 10/22/1996, 5:23 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


OK, after much due consideration and a great deal of sleep lost last
night, I decided that I am going to take the diary entry off of the end of
L in L 14. I'm not changing anything else though, except a few little
stylitic things, and maybe making Ryouga not be so in control in 13, and
yes, yes, I will change the pankcake thing, and YES I know what
okonomiyaki is, I eat it all the time in Japan Town, so don't give me any
more s*** about that, OK? I only said that because I didn't want to use
okonomiyaki in the same sentence twice.

Why am I getting rid of the diary entry?

Well, I decided that it IS a bit abrupt at the end of Chapter 14, doesn't
really fit in with what had come before, and too many people were thinking
it was a closure thing, when it was REALLY supposed to be a sort of
um... foreshadowing. Maybe.

The reason why I put it there is because there is going to be a major
stylistic change in Part 15. I am going to be moving on to a different
format, and there are going to be a lot of letters and jornals and such.
And, NO, I am NOT going to get RID of the emotional thing in 15, it 
just isn't going to be the most important part of the next part. The
Ranma/Akane/Ukyou/Ryouga thing has been basically resolved, and now
we are going to see how they deal with being apart, and the whole
thing about being "a whole guy again."

SOOOO... don't get all excited that things are going to change too much.
I think I AM going to can the Kasumi/Tofu bit, but the Nabiki/Kuno
thing stays as I DID give a hint that was going to happen during the 
photo incident chapter, and I might eventually come up with a little
side story for her.

well, that's about it....

thanks everyone for reading, it is going to be a bit before the next 
part comes out, as I am experimenting with what I have, and I want
it to come across right.

hugs! misachan ^_^

p.s. thanks WhiteWolf, Willmore, Panda, for all advice especially
*hugs and kisses*