I fear I fall into category 2, about both parts.  Which is a shame,
because I really loved parts 1 through 12.  Parts 13 and 14 came off as
a bit rushed, a bit schizophrenic, a bit of "let's wrap everything up
right now".  Akari was dealt with in a perfunctory manner, Ryoga and

1. It wasn't rushed from my standpoint, been working on them for a couple
of months.
2. Yes, I wanted to wrap up all the stuff that had been floating, because
the story wasn't about anyone but Ranma, Akane, Ukyou, and Ryouga.
3. Check on the Akari bit, I fixed that.

Ukyo got together very quick, and in general it was BAM Kuno and Nabiki

yup, bam on Kuno and Nabiki because there is supposed to be a feeling that
all this has been going on in the background while Ranma and Akane finally
realized how they felt about each other.

BAM Kuno Knows BAM Akari comes in BAM Ryoga tells her he doesn't love
her BAM Ryoga sleeps with Ukyo BAM Akari finds love elsewhere BAM...

BTW, Ryouga and Ukyou do NOT have sex.

Also, your attitude here confuses me.  You seem awfully closed to C&C. 
I mean, it's okay to ignore C&C - this is your story, your universe. 
But you shouldn't spend a lot of time justifying yourself, either.  It
makes you sound defensive.

Part of my character I guess. Remeber Sex and 16 year old girls? I spend
my life coming up with theses and then defending them... that's why I am
getting my PhD in English ^_^



bai bai!

misachan