C&C, ideas, comments, matchbooks from various bars for my collection, Bingo
cards, whatever.... are appreciated. Flames will be reported to the Miami
Beach Fire Dept., although they probaly won't be able to douse it (sheesh,
they let my fav. Cantonese restaurant burn down, and it's like half a mile
from the station!!!)
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Ummm... I think you need to go look at the Tendou's bathroom, or Japanese
bathrooms in general.
There's a change room which just has a sliding door, and a sign on it. It
can't be locked ... The laundry-type stuff is in the changing room with
the tray for clothes and towels and things.
In the bathroom itself is just a large tiled area with a giant bath,
more like a hot tub than a bath. There's nothing much in that room...
A stool to sit on while pouring the cold water before the bath and
things ... Also a little tub of things like shampoo, soap, etc...
Akane would have brought in her little wash cloth to the bath ... the
towel would be in the change room so it wouldn't get wet.
You can see the bathroom, the change room, etc, in the first Viz graphic
novel, if you have it, or in the first takubon, if you have that. You
can see the little washcloth thing, too ... and the general bathing
process...
So ... err... your 'fic needs a rather large overhaul... ^^;
Kun-chan...