Subject: Marital Arts 6 Changes
From: polaris@interpac.net (Jon K. Hayashi)
Date: 10/21/1996, 10:51 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

I just posted Episode 6 to both the remailer and r.a.a.c., so I'd just thought 
I'd go over some of the changes since I'm not reposting to the Mailing List.

Just before the second sex scene, Ranko does not notice nudity (or nearly 
so) among the others.  Everyone is dressed in underwear with some type of top 
(shirt, robe, etc), and they undress during the scene.

Ukyo does not go spying on Ranma and Akane the second night.  She gets waylaid 
in her room remembering the Shampoo-Ranko tryst.

Most of the other changes are even more minor, made to tighten up the dialogue 
or descriptions.  There was a slight change in the ending, but just to give it 
a better feel.

JK