Very good!  I like this better than your first Nuku fic,
because I think you did a better job of handling Kyusaku 
and Akikko's strange relationship.  Yes, there was some 
angst, but there still was some of the humor of the 
original series.  Best of all, the characters seemed to
be in-character.  You took how they acted in the series
and extrapolated from that.  Again, excellent job.

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