Subject: Revised part 2 of Nullifier 122
From: WebDragon
Date: 10/5/1996, 12:18 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

This is majorly revised from the original part 2.....at least 8000k bigger
and is quite different than the original.....as always, lemme know what ya
think of it.  Thank you.


(DISCLAIMER : ALL GLORY TO RUMIKO TAKAHASHI, AND THIS STORY OPERATES 
ON THE BASIS OF AN ALTERNATE RANMAVERSE.)  ALSO, EACH PART STARTS   
AND ENDS WITH A DIFFERENT DAY.   ALSO THIS PART HAS NO LEMON BITS IN 
IT.  This is the revised part two. 
   
-=-=-=-=-=-==-==-=-=-=-=-=-=Part Two-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- 

 
   
(Morning breaks over the land of the rising sun and birds soar   
above Nerima Ward, chirping their greeting song to the golden   
sun ascending into the sky.  Dewdrops grace the tip of each   
stalk of grass and every leaf on every tree.  For a short moment,   
the paradise that was lost when man abandoned Nature and turned   
to machinery, was present and glittered with a promise to remain till   
the end of time...  Then the first car backed out of its driveway and    
the dream was shattered.  As if by chain reaction, more cars fill the    
streets within minutes and the quiet morning is drenched in the sounds    
and smells of a typical Tokyo day.)   
   
(Kasumi, always up at the crack of dawn, knocks on Akane's bedroom,   
calling to the girls within and reminding them of school.  Immediately   
what sounds like a free-for-all ensues behind Akane's door as all the girls   
doff their PJ's and pull on their uniforms, desperate to get ready and get   
into school before the bell rings.  Kasumi, always unruffled by any daily   
event, smiles and walks over to Ranma's room and knocks on it.)   
   
Kasumi : Ranma!  Ranma!  Mr. Saotome!  Wake up, it's morning already!  Ranma and Ranma? 
        The both of you have school!  And I won't be home to cook lunch this afternoon so   
        you two have to eat out just for today.   
   
(Inside Ranma's room....)   
   
Ranma : SCHOOL!?  I forgot!  (leans over and shakes Ranma-chan)  Wake up!   
Ranma-chan : Huh?     
Ranma : We have school!  Come on, dress up!!   
Ranma-chan : School...!?  Omigod!  (leaps out of bed and grabs her clothes)   
Ranma : (grabbing his clothes)  Hurry up and use the bathroom!  I need it next!   
   
(In a short while, Akane, her friends and the two Ranma's are running   
to school.  Ranma and Ranma-chan are running in perfect balance on the    
fence, while Akane and her friends bring up the rear.  They manage to get   
into their classes in record time and Akane says goodbye to Yuki and Sayaka   
as they head off to their classes.  Everybody is already seated and waiting   
for the last minute stragglers to come in.  As Ranma, Ranma-chan and    
Akane walk in, the whole class gasps.)   
   
Hiroshi : Hey, who's that?   
Fuzaki : That's....um...Akane's cousin, or something.  She sure is cute!   
Ukyo : Wh-what's going on here?   
Akane : (sits in her seat)  You'll find out soon enough.  It's kind of a long story.   
Hinako : Ranma Saotome, who's the girl with you?   
Ranma : She's Akane's cousin, who came to register in this class.     
Hinako : (to Ranma-chan)  What's your name?   
Ranma-chan : Ranko Tendo.   
Hiroshi : (to Fuzaki) Ranko.....it has a nice ring to it!   
Hinako : Well, Ranko.  You can sit next to Ukyo over there.  Ukyo, will you raise your hand 
        please?   
Ukyo : S-sure.  (raises hand)   
   
(Ranma-chan sits next to Ukyo and class starts.  When Hinako   
left the room to get some notes, Ukyo turns to Ranma-chan.)   
   
Ukyo : Ranma?  (whips head to Ranma, who smiles at her)  Ranma?   
Ranma : We'll tell you after class.  Don't wanna talk about it right now.   
Hiroshi : Ranko?  Didn't you win that rhythmic gymnastics tournament, fighting against Kodachi 
       Kuno?     
Ranma-chan : Yeah, I did.   
Hiroshi : You were great!  You looked like you had been at it all your life!   
Ranma-chan : Thanks!  I trained real hard for that match.   
   
(Hinako returns and class resumes.  The moment the lunch bell   
rings, Ranma-chan's desk is swamped with boys.  Ranma-chan is   
forced to pretend ignorance as the boys fall over themselves trying   
to win her favor.)   
   
Ranma : These guys sure are picky!  First, they try to go out with Akane.  Now, they're trying 

       to go out with my female side!   
Ukyo : Ranma!!  What the heck is going on here?   
Ranma : Umm...well.  You see, I tried to cure my curse using a special potion called a        
            Nullifier.  Problem is that it split my male and female halves into two separate people 
        with the same personality and everything, mind-wise, I mean.     
Ukyo : So she's really you?   
Ranma : And I'm really her.   
Ukyo : Oh....how does she...I mean, he feel about being stuck in a female body?  It must be 
      horrible!   
Ranma : You know, you and Akane were the only people to think of her..I mean, his feelings. 
Ukyo : Really?  I'd better go and rescue him.  Excuse me for a sec.   
   
(Ukyo goes to the aid of Ranma-chan, laying about with her spatula   
and clearing a path to her dearest friend.  Ranma-chan looked flustered,   
holding a handful of paper slips with telephone numbers written on them.)   
   
Ranma-chan : Ucchan!  Save me!   
Ukyo : Come on, let's get outta here!   
   
(She grabs Ranma-chan's hand and they both leap out of the window,   
to soar into the air and land, without a scratch, on the ground.)   
   
Ukyo : Ranma!  Are you feeling fine?   
Ranma-chan : Of course I do!  I'm not gonna let a bunch of boys try and make passes at me! 
Ukyo : Then throw those slips of paper away.   
Ranma-chan : (looks at the bunch of paper in her fist) Huh?  Oh!  (tosses them away, and they 
          spiral upwards in the breeze and scatter themselves into the bushes.)  There, all   
          done!   
   
(Ranma-chan turns back to Ukyo and sees her looking at    
her closely, as if unable to comprehend something.)   
   
Ukyo : Ranchan?  Is it true that...   
Ranma-chan : Yup.  The potion-thingy screwed up and now I'm a girl while the other Ranma 
           is cured.  But don't worry, I'm gonna find a cure soon!  After that old ghoul   
           remembers how to reverse the effect, I'll be back to normal!   
Ukyo : You mean to say that Ranma...is cured?   
Ranma-chan : Hey, I'm Ranma!  I'm not cured in the least!  It's the boy Ranma that's not   
                  cursed anymore.   
Ukyo : And...how do you feel?   
Ranma-chan : Like I said, I feel fine!  I'm not gonna let a bunch of boys.....   
Ukyo : Idiot!  Not the boys!!  I mean, you.     
Ranma-chan : Huh?   
   
(A light breeze springs up and ruffles Ukyo's long    
ponytail.  She looks at Ranma for a moment longer, then    
she reaches back and lets her hair loose.  It immediately   
dances about her face and shoulders, a shimmering mass   
that highlights her features and complements her natural   
and graceful curves.)   
   
Ukyo : Ranma...I have something to say.   
Ranma-chan : Go..go on.   
Ukyo : Ever since we were little, we always played together.  We were the best of friends,   
      though we certainly didn't act like it.   
Ranma-chan : Yeah, I always won in the okonomiyaki contest.....   
Ukyo : Remember the time we went out into the meadow and played there for such a long time? 
Ranma-chan : (laughs) Oh yeah!  That time!  We simply lost track of time....Pop gave me a 
          lecturing on staying out too long on my own.   
Ukyo : And mine gave me a leathering.   
Ranma-chan : What?!  You never told me that!   
Ukyo : I was so ashamed, I didn't want to see you for a week.   
Ranma-chan : Yeah, you gave me some excuse for not showing up at the okonomiyaki cart   
           every morning for a whole week.   
Ukyo : We were such silly kids back then!  (Ranma-chan and Ukyo laugh at this)   
   
(Somehow, Ranma-chan sensed that that wasn't all that   
Ukyo wanted to say to her.  Ranma-chan waits patiently   
for Ukyo to find the words.)   
   
Ukyo : (takes a deep breath)  I love you, Ranma.  I really do.  Even back when we were kids, 
      I think I still loved you back then.   
Ranma-chan : Ukyo...(puts hand on Ukyo's) I already know that.  But this is not what you    
                  wanted to say to me.  Come on, say it or we'll be late for class!   
Ukyo : I'm confused...I don't know what to think anymore.  Ever since the other Ranma told 
     me what happened, my world has been turned upside down.   
Ranma-chan : Upside down?  What are you talking about?   
Ukyo : The other Ranma isn't cursed anymore, right?   
Ranma-chan : Right....and?   
Ukyo : (considers this for a moment)  Never mind.   
Ranma-chan : What do you mean `never mind'?  You've come so far.  Come on, tell me! 
Ukyo : (sighs)  Why don't the two of you come over this afternoon to my restaurant?  And 
      bring Akane too, okay?  I'll treat you all to free food. 
Ranma-chan : You always treat us to free food, Ucchan.  Even that time when Akane came in 
           by herself, without me with her.  You still gave her a free okonomiyaki.  So 
           what's up? 
Ukyo : If you don't want the food, then don't come.  (she smiles at Ranma-chan, gives her a 
          hug and walks back to class.) 
Ranma-chan : Huh?? (scratches her head)  What was that all about? 
 
(Back in class, Ukyo is scribbling furiously in her notepad. 
Hinako smiles in approval and cited her as an example of 
a good student.  Shamed by Hinako's words, the entire class, 
except Ranma and Ranma-chan, start to take their work more  
seriously.  But if anybody had been looking carefully at Ukyo's  
`work', they would have seen a smattering of cooking terms, 
names of ingredients and a little sketch of an okonomiyaki. 
Ukyo smiled to herself uncertainly as she regarded all that she 
had done so far, making a few minor adjustments here and there. 
This was going to be a very special okonomiyaki, the absolute 
best creation of her life.  She giggles a little as she looked over 
at Ranma, who looked back with confusion in his eyes.  He'll  
soon understand.  Her eyes fell on Ranma-chan, who was looking 
at her with the same look of confusion in Ranma's eyes.  Ranma. 
Suddenly sobered by a nagging thought that had insinuated itself 
the moment Ranma-chan told her of the Nullifier, she let her 
grin drop and she sighed heavily, head in hand and mind far, far 
away.) 
 
Hinako : Ukyo, is something the matter?  Are you feeling alright?  You don't have to work 
        so hard, you know. 
Ukyo : No, Hinako-sensei.  I'm fine. 
Hinako : Well...if you're sure.  Okay class, back to the blackboard. 
 
(School ends and Ukyo zips to her restaurant.  The crowd 
of people waiting outside Ucchan's Okonomiyaki parted 
and she threw the doors open.  Within minutes, okonomiyaki 
were flying left and right, and diners dined to their absolute 
content.  As soon as the initial rush had died down, Ukyo 
pulled out her notepad and started to prepare the special 
okonomiyaki - pouring all her energy and effort into it. 
This had to be perfect from the outstart.) 
 
(Ranma, Ranma-chan and Akane step into the restaurant. 
As usual, it was packed full, except for the counterseats, 
which all the regulars knew were unofficially reserved 
for Ukyo's friends.  The regulars nodded at them, used 
to seeing them visit Ukyo all the time.  A small black
pig sat on the counter, in front of a plate with a half 
eaten okonomiyaki.  It looks around, and squeals in
delight as it sees Akane.  Then its eyes widen in 
confusion as it sees Ranma and Ranma-chan side by
side.  It blinks once, then twice.  Ranma-chan mouths
the words, "I'll explain later", to the pig, and it nods.)

Akane : P-Chan!  (P-Chan leaps into her arms)  What are you doing here?
Ukyo : Well...uh..he sorta walked in...and I gave him a free okonomiyaki.
Akane : Thank you, Ukyo. 
Ukyo : No problem.  Took you guys long enough to get here, though.
Akane : *You* skipped out on your classroom cleaning duties...so we had to do your share of 
       it, you know! 
Ukyo : Aww, Akane.  I'm sorry....let me make it up to you with an okonomiyaki of your  
     choice, okay? (she grins) 
Akane : Bribery won't get you anywhere, Ukyo!  (her stomach growls loudly. Ranma snickers 
       at this and Akane jabs an elbow into his side.)   
Ukyo : A hungry stomach won't get you anywhere, Akane.  Come on, take me up on my  
     offer. 
Akane : ........Alright.  But just this once!   
Ukyo : Alright, Akane!  
 
 (She spins an okonomiyaki to her and Akane begins to dig into it,   
trying to keep a facade of anger on her face, which softened to her  
normal features after a short while.   She could never really stay 
angry at Ukyo for long...mainly because she was kind, sweet, 
and generous.  In fact Ukyo was much like her in a number of 
ways.  She was almost everything a stereotypical girl was not - strong, 
stubborn, free-willed and quick tempered.  Ukyo, when she first 
arrived in Furinkan High, was dressed as a boy and acted like one 
too.  Since then, she had changed a great deal.  She wore her a gi of a  
sort, with nice blue designs on it.  She wore a bandola filled with mini  
spatulas, but she left the big spatula at home.  The both of them compete  
for Ranma's attention, not that I need his attention!, thought she as she  
looked at Ranma with a slight tinge of red coloring her cheeks, and the  
both of them had caregiving personalities.  At least that's what she thought  
of herself. I took in a lost pig and named him, I helped Ranma against Happosai 
a few times, I bandaged Ranma after that fight with Mikado.  I guess 
I qualifiy as being nice.  She looked at Ukyo, who was smiling and 
chatting with another customer, even as she cooked an extraordinarily 
tasty looking okonomiyaki.  Akane turned away and looked long and 
hard at her okonomiyaki.  Ukyo was so...so...much more beautiful than 
her.  She had long hair, beautiful skin and a great figure.  She felt so 
dumpy and ugly compared to her.  Jabbing her okonomiyaki with a fork 
and savagely ripping a piece off, she popped the morsel in her mouth and 
took great satisfaction in chewing it.  P-Chan leapt out of her arms and
started gobbling his food.) 
 
(Ranma-chan looked at Akane stabbing her food with uncharacteristic 
vigor.  She saw that her eyes were slightly narrowed and her brow was 
creased.  Yup, she's angry again.  But over what?  Her gaze travelled 
upwards and she looked at Ukyo, who was preparing an especially 
delicious-looking okonomiyaki.  Ranma-chan began to lose herself 
in looking at Ukyo, trying to imagine how she had looked like when 
she was playing with....him in her childhood, but she just couldn't picture  
her being the way she was.  She had grown and changed alot since those 
days.  She turned around and put her elbows on the wooden counter behind 
her, and let her memories travel back a decade, to a time when little had 
troubled him.  She could remember the town where Ukyo and him had 
stayed.  She thought of the `safari' adventure he had with Ukyo back then, 
a wild romp through the flowering meadows........ahhh, yes....) 
 
[Ranma jumped onto a rock in the middle of the meadow and looked 
about with a hand shading his eyes.  Dragonflies zipped all about and 
insects filled the air.  The chirping of birds drifted off a scattering of  
nearby trees.  He looked up into a gloriously blue sky that seemed to 
stretch forever and ever, encompassing the entire world that was his 
birthright.  He took a deep whiff of the sweet summer grasses that  
reached up from the moist earth to the shining sun which gave freely of 
its light, and he exhaled slowly.  It was so good!  The heady aroma of 
flowers seemed to swirl and drift all about him, encouraging him to take 
another breath.  And another.  He closed his eyes and let out an impulsive 
cry of exultation, the shout of somebody who was completely content with 
the world about him, akin to the majestic symphony of nature which now 
sang its praise and gave its thanks to the gods for creating such a wonderful 
world.  The cricket chirped, the birds sang, dragonflies flitted in the air 
and dodged the drifting dandelion puffs swirling in the breeze and spiraling 
up, and up, and upwards into an endless summer sky.   
 
<Hey, whatcha doing, Ranchan?> 
Ranma turned around.  Ukyo ran up to the rock he was on and squeezed  
himself next to him.  Ranma graciously let him take his spot on the rock; 
after all, he was his friend.  Ukyo was his best friend in the world. 
 
<Ucchan, isn't this the best?>, he said to his friend.  Ukyo bobbed her 
head up and down, and he sat on the rock.  Ranma remained standing and 
looked at the grass covered hill which lay just ahead of the meadow, then he 
looked over at Ukyo.  Ukyo had a handful of flowers in his hand and he was  
counting out the stalks, humming a tune to himself as he did.  Ranma leapt  
off the rock and started to run to the hill. 
 
<Hey, Ucchan!  Come on!  Let's go up that hill!>, he called to his friend even 
as he ran. 
 
<Ranchan!!!  Wait up!>  Ukyo threw the flowers away and started after her 
friend.  The two surmounted the hill with no difficulty and the two stood at the 
peak, looking down at the land all around.  The greenery was gone and the two 
friends looked down at the town and its concrete structures.  Cars rushed to and 
fro, and people thronged the sidewalks.  Ranma shuddered.  People were not 
meant to like so closely packed together.  He looked back down the hill and the 
welcome sight of the forest and the meadow greeted his eyes.   
 
<Ranchan, what's wrong?>, asked Ukyo. 
 
<Nothin', Ucchan.> 
A far off voice echoed through the large meadow, <Ranma!   
Ukyo!!  Where are the both of you?!>.  A man wearing a  
bandanna, a pair of glasses and a karate gi, stepped from out  
of the concealing shade of the trees at the far end of the meadow. 
 
<Come on, Ucchan, or you'll be left behind!  Race you to the okonomiyaki cart!> 
With that, Ranma sprinted towards his father, eyes fixed ahead and not looking back. 
 
<W-Wait!  Don't leave me behind, Ranchan!>  Ukyo shook off her lethargy 
and sprinted after Ranma....] 
 
(Ranma-chan chuckled to herself.  Back then, she thought Ukyo was 
a boy, like her.  She turned back and looked at Ukyo, both hands under 
her chin.  No way anybody could mistake her for a boy again, and those 
who disagreed were either stupid or blind.  She legs that looked so 
slim and sexy, especially while she was wearing tight, black jeans.  She 
smiled and closed her eyes, walking the paths of her memories, memories 
of Ukyo.) 
 
(Ranma looked perplexed.  First, Akane was placated all too easily by 
Ukyo.  Then his female self sighed dreamily and seemed to stare off 
in the distance.  And now, he saw Ukyo cooking the best and most 
delicious-looking, and smelling, okonomiyaki, putting her customers' 
orders on hold for the time being, occasionally looking at Ranma and 
giving him a smile.  What's with the puppy dog eyes, Ucchan?, he was 
tempted to ask, but he said nothing.)

Ukyo : Ranma!  Here it is!  (she scoops the okonomiyaki up, puts it on a plate and gives it to
     Ranma.)
Ranma : Th-that was for...for me?!  THANK YOU, UCCHAN!!! (he digs into the okonomiyaki
       furiously.)
Ukyo : Anytime, Ranma.  And now, the same thing for you, Ran...er...Ranko.  
Ranma-chan : Thank you, Ucchan.
Customer 1 : Umm, excuse me but I ordered my food ten minutes ago.  Could I have it?
Customer 2 : Yeah, me too.  I'm starving, Ukyo.
Customer 3 : Where's my special deluxe super-combo okonomiyaki?
Customer 4 : I'd like to order another okonomiyaki, Ukyo.
Ukyo : Okay, okay!  I get the point!  Ranko, do you mind waiting?
Ranma-chan : Umm...but not for too long, Ucchan.  I'm starving.
Ukyo : I'll try my best.  Now, who's first?

(She starts to take orders and fill them out.  However, as if on cue,
a horde of people flood the restaurant at that moment.  Ukyo is kept
extremely busy trying to take orders, fill them and collect the money - 
all by herself.  Ranma-chan looks hopefully at Ukyo but she didn't have
the time to even talk with her.  Eventually, Ranma-chan tries to say 
something to Ukyo, to tell her that she was leaving, but Ukyo was
already running into the back of the restaurant to get more supplies.
The counter was already burgeoning with hungry people and when
Ukyo came back, Ranma-chan tried again.)

Ranma-chan : Ukyo, I....
Ukyo : *Not* now, Ranma!!  (Ranma looks up from his nearly finished okonomiyaki.  Ukyo
      scowls.)  Not you, Ranma.  Ranm..ko, I'm very busy right now....(she looks very
      flustered).  Can you come back later?
Ranma-chan : ...........Okay, Ucchan.  

(She leaves the restaurant, feeling cheated out of a fabulous
meal.  She could hear Ukyo taking orders and cooking at the
same time.  She *was* very busy....but why didn't she also
take the time to cook that special okonomiyaki for her when
she did it for Ranma?  Ranma-chan knows that it was selfish
of her to get angry at Ukyo, for not getting a free meal, but
she still can't help herself from feeling....betrayed.  She took
time out for Ranma, why didn't she take time for her?)

Ranma : Ranma!  Wait up for us, man!  (he is holding a little piece of okonomiyaki)
Akane : That was delicious!  I should come here every day after school and have her           
            okonomiyaki!
Ranma : You thought it was delicious?  Mine was the ultimate!  It rocked!
P-Chan : Squee?  (looks between Ranma and Ranma-chan)  Bu-kii?
Ranma-chan : Can I hold P-Chan, Akane?
Akane : Sure.  Just don't pick on him, or else.  (she hands P-Chan to Ranma-chan, who begins
      to talk to P-Chan in a soft tone.  P-Chan's ears perked up and he nodded in             
          understanding.)
Ranma : (After watching Ranma-chan for a while)  Aww, come on.  Cheer up!  It's not the end 
           of the world, Ranma.  Here, you can have this piece I was saving for later.
Ranma-chan : No thanks.  (cradles P-Chan).
Ranma : Huh?  Come on, man.  It's the best thing I've ever eaten in my life!
Ranma-chan : Let's go to Nekohanten.  I'm hungry.  (she starts to shuffle away)
Akane : Ranma?  What's wrong? 
Ranma-chan : Nothing.  Here, Akane.  (gives P-Chan back to Akane.)
 
(The three troop to Nekohanten.  As usual, the place is also
packed, but the three manage to find a table.  Within a   
minute or so, Cologne hops over to their table with    
three bowls of ramen balanced on one hand.  She sets   
them down on the table.  Ranma-chan grabs two of the
bowls and starts to devour them.  Ranma finishes his
okonomiyaki piece and starts on the remaining bowl of
ramen.  He looks up at Cologne, who was wiping their
table with a cloth while balanced perfectly on her stick.)   
   
Ranma : Where's Shampoo?  Your hands seem kinda full now, with all these people in here. 
   
(*Crack*  The cup in Akane's hand shatters into pieces.    
She looks over at the mess on the table underneath her   
hand in shock.  Cologne narrows her eyes.)   
   
Cologne : You will, of course, reimburse me for the price of that cup, dearie.   
Akane : S-sorry.  I guess I was gripping it a little too hard.   
Ranma-chan : (rolls her eyes)  Funny how that always seems to happen whenever Shampoo   
          is mentioned.   
Cologne : Yes, isn't it fascinating?  Anyhow, Shampoo's out delivering.  She won't be back  
              until late tonight.   
Ranma-chan : Have you remembered whether or not there's a cure for my condition?   
Cologne : No, I don't know.  Well, I've got to be going.  If you want to talk some more, come 
         back later at night.  (she leaps away and sees to the customers - the paying ones, that  
         is.)   
   
(Ranma-chan finishes her meal and the three head back home.  
By now it's late afternoon, approaching evening.  Ranma-chan 
throws herself full on the couch and turns the TV on.  Akane 
walks up to Ranma-chan.)   
   
Akane : Ranma, could you hold P-Chan for me?  I'm going to go to the washroom for a sec, 
       and I don't want him wandering about.     
Ranma-chan : Give him to me.  (Akane hands P-Chan to Ranma-chan and walks off)   
P-Chan : Bu-kii!  (looks at Ranma-chan, eyes narrowed)   
Ranma-chan : You're no catch yourself, pig.  Now, shut up and lemme watch TV.  (She hugs 
           P-Chan to her chest and P-Chan's entire head turned red with all the blood   
           rushing to his head.)   
P-Chan : Kwee!  Kwee!   
Ranma-chan : What's that, piggy?  (evil grin)   
P-Chan : (points at his snout)  BU-KIII!!   
Ranma-chan : Oh yeah, the nosebleed thing.  (grins at P-Chan)  Of course I know.  (quickly  
          sets an angry P-Chan on the couch, who points his snout up in the air and takes   
          deep breaths of air)   
   
(Ranma walks up to the couch, holding a bag of   
chips in one hand and a can of pop in the other.)   
   
Ranma : Hey, move it!  Where am I gonna sit?   
Ranma-chan : Oh, okay.  (she merely pulls her legs in, leaving a small space for Ranma to sit 
                  in)   
Ranma : Well, thanks a lot for the big space!  (he sits down)   
Ranma-chan : Anytime.  Gimme some chips.   
   
(Ranma gives her a handful of chips and Ranma-chan   
devours them.  Ranma puts the can of pop on the floor.   
Promptly Ranma-chan grabs it and takes a swig from it.)   
   
Ranma : Hey, that's my pop!   
Ranma-chan : So that makes it mine as well.   
Ranma : Gimme that back!  (he swipes the can from Ranma-chan's hands and drinks the whole 
       thing.  While he was drinking all the contents of the can, Ranma-chan sneaks a handful 
       of chips from the bag.)   
Ranma-chan : (between munches)  Do you....think there.....really is a cure for....me?     
Ranma : Why shouldn't there be?  (looks in his bag of chips and sees a handful missing.)   
Ranma-chan : Well, if that three-hundred-year-old ghoul doesn't know, how are we supposed 
                   to know? (sounds pretty depressed)   
Ranma : She just didn't remember, that's all.     
   
(Ranma-chan changes channels.  It is a TV documentary   
on the differences in thinking between men and women.   
Ranma-chan watches it in silence while Ranma fidgets   
about.  Eventually he held out a hand to Ranma-chan.)   
   
Ranma : Here, gimme that remote.   
Ranma-chan : No, I wanna watch this.     
Ranma : That's just a stupid documentary!  Let me have it, let's watch something more   
        interesting.   
Ranma-chan : And this isn't interesting?   
Ranma : No!   
Ranma-chan : Well, I think it's interesting.  So, you can't have the remote.   
   
(Ranma made a grab for the remote but Ranma-chan   
clutches it close to herself.  Growling, he launched    
himself onto Ranma-chan, who squealed and fought   
to keep the remote from Ranma's grasp.  The two   
wrestle on the couch, Ranma on top and trying to   
rip the remote from Ranma-chan's hands, Ranma-chan   
laughing and enjoying herself.  Akane walks into the   
living room - and sees Ranma straddling Ranma-chan,   
who was struggling against Ranma's superior strength.   
Akane stands there for a while longer, wondering if    
she should run over and give Ranma a good whack   
on the head, when Ranma finally pulls the remote   
free from Ranma-chan's hands and held it over his   
head.)   
        
Ranma : Finally!  Now, let's watch something with action in it.   
Ranma-chan : (still laughing)  That was great!  Let's do it again!   
Akane : Do what again?   
Ranma : Uh, Akane!  Umm...(looks at the remote in his hands)   
Ranma-chan : We were just fighting over the remote, jeez.  As if you have anything to worry 
                   about when I'm around him...after all we're the same person.    
Ranma : Hey, it wasn't like that at all!!   
Ranma-chan : (grins from ear to ear)  Just kidding!   
Ranma : Oh yeah?  Just kidding, you say.  (picks up a pillow and whacks her)   
Ranma-chan : Ohh!  So you wanna fight dirty?  (grabs two pillows and whacks him)   
   
(The two release their pent-up tension with a good-natured   
pillow fight, Ranma-chan hitting Ranma twice as much as   
he did her, but Ranma's blows had more force behind them.   
The impromptu pillow fight dissipates in heartfelt laughter   
from the two of them, joined by Akane after she saw the   
innocence behind everything.  There is a knock on the door,    
a polite rap-rap designed to draw just enough attention for the    
inhabitants to notice.  Akane gets up and goes to the door.)   
   
Akane : I'll get it!  (she opens the sliding door)   
Nodoka : Good afternoon, Akane-chan!     
Akane : M-Mrs. Saotome?!  I'm sorry, we weren't expecting you at all!   
Nodoka : (bows) I'm sorry, I should call or write before I come to visit.  Next time, dear, I'll 
        remember.     
   
(She removes her shoes and walks into the living room,   
and the first thing she saw was Ranma-chan's familiar   
form lying on the couch.)   
   
Nodoka : Good afternoon, Ranko!     
Ranma-chan : Ran..ko?  (slowly turns around)  Oh!!  M-Mrs. Saotome!   
Nodoka : I'm sorry, I know you weren't expecting me to visit so....(trails off when she sees  
        a well-built figure with black hair tied back in a pigtail, sitting next to Ranma-chan.)   
Ranma : (turns around slow-like)  M-Mom?    
Nodoka : Ranma!!  You're finally back!!     
   
(Nodoka drops everything and hastens to Ranma's side,   
and hugs him so tight that he had difficulty breathing.   
Ranma-chan watches in shock, not fully comprehending   
what was happening.)   
   
Nodoka : You're real!!  You're back!  How have you been?!   
Ranma : Umm...fine, mom.   
Ranma-chan : Hey...(lifts a hand)   
Nodoka : Forgive me, Ranko-chan.  I haven't seen my son for sixteen years!  It's only fair that 
        I finally get to see him now!  I pray that this is not a dream......   
Soun : (walks in)  Nodoka!  What a pleasant surprise!   
Nodoka : (still hugging Ranma)  If I may ask, where's Genma?   
Genma : (walks in at that moment)  D-dear?     
Nodoka : Genma!  My son is a man among men!  The Saotome family honor is preserved (looks 
        meaningfully at her sword-shaped bundle).  See how handsome and strong he is?   
Genma : Likewise, I'm as happy and proud as you are....s-see how well I raised him?   
Ranma-chan : Yeah right.  Animals woulda raised me better than you did.  Actually, come to 
              think about it, Pop *is* an animal.  A panda, to be exact.   
Nodoka : What's that, Ranko?  (starts cooing over Ranma, who looks embarassed)   
Ranma-chan : Nothing.  Nothing at all.  (takes one last look at Ranma, who shrugs in apology, 
          and she leaves the living room.)   
Akane : Ranma?  What's wrong?   
Ranma-chan : Here she is, after a long while, and she finally sees me.  My male form, I mean. 
Akane : I understand, Ranma.     
   
(She remembers the many times she had seen Ranma-chan's   
shoulders slump whenever Nodoka visited.  Although she   
had the Ranko role down pat and she could truly act like   
a real girl, Akane would always see the glimmer of pain   
in her eyes, the slight jerkiness of her movements, the   
overly-feigned high-pitched Ranko voice.  Ranma-chan   
heaves a big sigh and leaves the living room, and goes   
up to her bedroom.)   
   
Nodoka : Ranma, why aren't you more happy to see your dear, old mom again?   
Ranma : I....am happy.  I really am.  I'm just, well, in shock.   
Nodoka : Come on, dear.  Let's go sit down and you can tell me all about your training.  Your 
        mom's here to stay and I promise I'll make you the happiest son in the world.  I have  
        a special meal that I'll cook right after you tell me of your travels!  (hugs him again)   
Ranma : O-okay. (looks after Ranma-chan's retreating figure.)   
   
(Inside her room, Ranma-chan reaches back and deliberately   
pulls her hair tie off.  Her pigtail untwirls and spreads out into   
a fan of red hair, covering half of her back.  She brushes it out   
with her fingers and looks into a mirror.  How different I look   
without a pigtail, she thought to herself.  Now, even more so,   
she looked like any normal girl, and she was a little disturbed   
by that.  She quickly ties the pigtail back on and flops down on   
her bed, letting the soft futon accept her body and comfort it.   
It's not fair, she repeated over and over in her mind, tears coming   
out even though she tried hard to keep them in.  Downstairs, the   
chatter increased in volume, as Nodoka lets all her pent-up emotion   
out, gathered over 16 years.  She could hear Ranma telling Nodoka   
about his training and journeys to many places, and Nodoka   
exclaiming in joy and happiness.  Ranma-chan pulls the comforter   
closer to her, trying to find solitude in the dark confines of her    
room, but she fails.  At last, she grabs Ranma's pillow and stuffs it   
around her ears.  With the sound muffled, she drifted in and out of   
sleep, always on the edge of the land of dreams, but never setting   
foot within that fabled country for the sounds of merriment from    
below keep her from sleeping.  Her door opens and somebody    
steps inside.)   
   
Akane : Ranma?   
Ranma-chan : Go 'way.  Just leave me alone.   
Akane : Ranma, I can't.  Not now, not when you're like this.   
Ranma-chan : Since when did you care?!  My life hasn't been normal since I got this curse.... 
Akane : C'mon, stop feeling sorry for yourself.  (kneels beside Ranma-chan)     
Ranma-chan : I can't.  I'm only Ranko to my mom, not...not (lets out a sharp sob) Ranma..! 
Akane : Ranma?     
   
(Nodoka's voice from downstairs) : Akane!  Akane!  Where's my son's fiancee?!  Come back, 
                         Akane, so I can see how well the both of you go together!   
Akane : ACK!!  I can't believe she just yelled tha-....Ranma?   
   
(Akane sees her silently shaking with tears that rage against    
the barrier of her eyelids and try to burst forth from her, but    
she holds it back with willpower.  Akane puts a hand on    
Ranma-chan's shoulder and the dam bursts.  The tears flow   
freely and Ranma-chan softly cries for herself.  Akane hesitates   
for a second, then she tries to pull Ranma-chan into a hug, but   
Ranma-chan refused to move.)   
   
Ranma-chan : *sniff*  A-Akane.  You'd better go to them.  I wanna be alone.   
Akane : But.....   
Ranma-chan : (whirls on her)  JUST GO!  I'M BROKEN-HEARTED, OR CAN'T YOU SEE 
          THAT?!!     
Akane : Ranma.....(she gets up and walks from the room, closing the door as she did so.)   
Ranma-chan : Stupid Akane...(shakes as a new bout of tears assails her).  It's not fair...   
                                * * * * * 
(Ukyo finally closes her restaurant, relieved to be able to breath
easily once more.  She counted the cash in her drawer; almost 
seventy thousand yen in bills, cheques and coins.  She sighed.
This money would go to paying for her overhead, and her
suppliers and a whole bunch of others.  She expected to pull
out a profit of about 28 000 yen out of today, but that's about
it.  She sweeps the restaurant up - in remarkably clean condition
considering how busy it was.  Then she scraped her griddle clean,
threw the grease away and began to put her ingredients away.
She methodically put away the sauce, the prepared okonomiyaki
and anything she could find.  At last, only a tray covered with 
some wax paper remained.  She lifted the wax paper, to see where
this thing would go to.  An extra-large size, uncooked okonomiyaki
sat on a plate in the middle of the tray.  Her specially prepared 
ingredients that she thought up of during class were arranged neatly
around it, and there was a little piece of paper on the okonomiyaki
itself, written side facing down.  Curious, she picked the paper up
and read it.  It was in her own handwriting and it read, "For the
female Ranchan.  Make it with love, sweety!".  Ukyo gasped 
and let the paper fall from nerveless fingers.  Ranchan didn't get
the okonomiyaki that she was promised!  She thought of what she
said to Ranma-chan when she came up to the counter.  She remembered
her mood at that time.  With the benefit of hindsight, she realized
how cruel and dismissive she must have sounded to Ranma-chan.
She sort of remembered Ranma-chan turning and leaving without
a wave or a backward glance.  Ranma and Akane had thanked her,
hurriedly, and followed after Ranma-chan.)

Ukyo : (puts her hand on the uncooked okonomiyaki) Ranma......I'm sorry.  You've always 
      been my best friend, but I failed you.  I promise, I'll make it up to you.

(She picks the okonomiyaki up and sits down on one of the seats
at the counter, the one that Ranma-chan was last sitting in.  She
absently twirled the okonomiyaki on a finger, and let her memories
slide back a decade....back to her childhood.  Ahh...she could
almost smell the summer grasses that comprised much of the
meadow, could almost feel the wildflowers that grew in clumps and
gave the meadow its special look.  Ranchan had jumped on the rock and 
started to look about.  Then he had yelled something and she started to 
run towards Ranchan......)
                                * * * * *    
(Sleep finally overtakes Ranma-chan, delivering her to the dream   
country, where all cares and worries are forgotten.  The same   
landscape from before, with the flowing grasses and enigmatic   
mountain ranges capped with a layer of white snow.  Ranma-chan   
takes a walk through the tall grasses, not flying this time.  A   
forest looms up in front of her and she enters the treeline.  The   
sunlight filters through the canopy and dapples the clearing   
in front of her with bright spots of light.  A pool was in the middle   
of the clearing, deep, sparkling, and mysterious.  Without knowing   
why, she steps up to the pool and looks into the still waters.  A single   
drop of water fell from the canopy and struck the placid surface, disturbing   
the tranquility and creating ripples that flowed outwards to the edge of   
the pool.  A face formed in the waters, with flowing hair and sharp   
features.  It was a man, and he was handsome.  He turned to face   
Ranma-chan and he said something, but Ranma-chan couldn't make   
out what he was saying.  The face moved away from the pool   
and the full figure of the man could be seen.  He put an open palm   
out and a bottle of a white liquid appeared in his hands.  On it were   
marked the numbers "221".  He started to walk toward Ranma-chan,   
the bottle held in his hand, but the dream image shimmered and    
dissolved.  Ranma-chan fell into the dark realm of dreamlessness,   
and the next change in her body chemistry occured.  She moaned,   
tossed, and turned as her body adjusted itself according to a schedule   
known in full only by itself.  The night is especially silent and the    
radiance from a thousand stars streamed through the window and   
bathed the sleeping body of Ranma-chan in starlight.)   
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-End Part Two-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=