First I have to get something off my chest...

AHHH The purple robes...Here!!! My god this is really becoming an elseworlds...
What's next, cursed springs...

There I feel better...

And on to a real comment, well This was a another great story with enough knew
stuff added to keep you going. Of course we find out that the guy in the
crystal is Jedite, I sorta of knew that from the get go..:) Also we get to see
how powerfull Naru really is, and man she could take down the Senshi...One has
to wonder where she gets the power...(Actually I have an idea, but I'm not
telling..:) Nice use of Hotaru, and the outer Senshi were used nicely, although 
more like the S Tv series version than the later version's..(Okay, so I've only
seen SM S the movie as a latter time frame..)

Anyway great work, and I can't wait to see more...

(But one has to wonder about those Purple Robes, Mr Hosmer and Mr Biles...?:)

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Yuki-chan forever!!!