Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C]Taleswapper's Quarterly Post
From: Nightelf
Date: 10/2/1996, 7:36 PM
To: Talswapr@aol.com
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Wed, 2 Oct 1996 Talswapr@aol.com wrote:

"Burned and Broken: Part the First of the Sunrise Chronicles"
by Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"

Because so many background elements of "Sunrise" are fleshed out well in
"Burned and Broken,"  I have to wonder about the quality of the main plotline
in the remaining chapters of "The Sunrise Chronicles."  The wise chieftain
Ranma and the grim warrior Nabiki portrayed in "Sunrise" are now almost fully
explained, they just need a few years of maturing.  The subplot revolving
around Blossom will no doubt prove interesting, but its climax has been
telegraphed and its outcome decided.  The Happosai and wedding stories
announced in the teaser may very well be excellent standalone tales, but
linking them effectively to "Sunrise" will be a challenge for Leifker.

Okay.  NOW I'm nervous.  ;)  

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Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu
"He's so beautiful when he's unconscious."
-Kodachi Kuno, "Kurobara"
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