MEMORIES OF PAIN
by ?
*Grammar: 6.7  You know you misspelled the chapter one title....  Or was
that done on purpose?  The sentence  structure is great, just you mispelled
a few stuff and some punctuation errors.
*Story:  6  Man, it looks like another Sailor Moon eposide.
*Characters:  7  bring some good life into the antangonists.
*Overall: 6.5  Hmmm, I was bored with reading this.  Maybe because I don't
like Sailor Moon that much.  

PROJECT: S-BOY CHAPTER ONE: MEETINGS
by David Outram ?
*Grammar: 8
*Story:  7  It's a basic story, but the author writes pretty well to make
it interesting.
*Characters: 8  I'm not familiar with Superboy nor Knockout, nor that other
guy..  but the author did a god job briefly discribing who they were.  The
A-ko gang seemed to be according to themselves.  Oh, don't use the same
lines more than twice in the same page.  (This is minor)
*Humor: 1
*Lemon: 1 That near tentacle rape scene.
*Overall: 8  I like the author's writing style, it's not heavy duty like
some authors here. I hope he keeps it up.

KIMAGURE ORANGE COLLEGE EPOSIDE THREE
by Stephen Tsai and the KOC gang.
*Grammar: 7
*Story:  8 your average KOR story.  But I still love it.
*Characters: 8 Madoka and Kyosuke's jeously is portrayed nicely.  The new
characters I'm still getting used to but are handled really great.  I liked
that introduction of Akane.
*Overall: 8.5  Another excellent eposide from KOC.  It sends me shivers
every time I read one of their eposides.  Definalty one of the best fanfics
every written.  Can't wait to read more.






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