On Thu, 19 Sep 1996 23:37:38 -0400 Joseph "Ashira" Kohle wrote:

:      Part IV
: 
:      To be a Man


:      The night had just gone downhill from there. Ranma had suddenly
: had his hands full with more than he could do. Ukyou's questions and
: demands on his attention were complicatedly Akane trying to answer for
: him, and her inability to leave his side.

Huh?  "Complicated by", perhaps?


Overall:  Nice;  The way you portray the relationship between
Ukyou and Akane, the sad, bitter, but hopeful making-up scene. 
And *very* good analysis of Ranma's real motive for his pursuit of


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