Magic Knight Kyone wrote:

Here is the first part of my first fanfic.  I will apreciate any C&C.  I
hope you enjoy!

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	Actually, I loved this! I'm pretty glad SOMEONE took it up to write
this crossover (which, at least in terms of character design, was pretty
obvious.)
	Hmm, Ranma-chan seems to have received the old "feminine-character
bump-to-the-head" from Nettouhen 31, right? No wonder she's acting quite
a lot like Hikaru-chan... ^_^ However, I can imagine that this Burning
Hiryuushoutenha is WAY stronger than the Flame Arrow.
	I wonder what's gonna happen during the battles, given that this trio
is very skilled already at martial arts, whereas only Umi and Hikaru had
fencing and kendo training respectively...
	Another point of interest will probably be the Eskudo Swords. Let's see
what sort of weapons Presia gives them! -_^
	Oh, and what will happen now with Ferio, eh? And Lantis, for that
matter? BTW, if you *do* reach the second series, I can't even imagine
how powerful Ranma-chan's Nova will be like...
	Anyway, you can probably tell I liked this a lot. Keep it up, and good
luck!


-- 
The TerBril
(who finally found the time to reply after receiving those
300+ ML messages... ouch.)