Yeah, the idiots finally restored my account... But what they restored
was what I had in memory at the beginning of the semester! Yaaaaaagh!
	I will post TCP's Final Test on Thursday. But I need a little help:
	I NEED WEBDRAGON'S ADDRESS!!!

	Okay, on with the C&C...
	So far, the story's excellent. It does a much better job of developing
both Ranmas than Split Personalities <shudder> and as far as I can tell,
they're IC all the time. Since I just lost the story itself (aaargh!) I
can't help you with grammar nor spelling. In the meantime, though, you
might consider explaining a bit further how the changes affect
Ranma-chan's mind, as sometimes it seems a bit rushed (the part where
she's pushed into acting like she's intersted in Ryouga jumped into my
sight.)
	Also, the semi-Lemon bits, while still akward, do a good job of
describing Ranma-chan's physical and mental changes. It's easy to see
how her new femininity gives her the special "urges," but they're just
that, urges, whereas Split's Ranko was practically jumping at the chance
(that's why I didn't like it much.)
	
	BTW, WebDragon, could you resend me your story? I have no maximum size
for the messages I receive, so you can paste the entire thing in a
single convenient package. Thanks in advance, and keep up the good work!

The TerBril
(whose favorite Ranma 'fics are precisely double-Ranma ones... heck, *I*
wrote one!)