Okay, thanks!  I'm finally getting great suggestions!  I would reply
privately but I have some things I would like to point out.

Nightelf wrote:>>Now, I'm not naturally evil,

Yes, you are.  You just haven't relized it yet. ;)

Well, I really try not to be evil.  I have enough enemies at school, I don't
need any on the ML.  Besides, on the ML, get someone mad enough, and they
might do something they wouldn't do in real life.

How did I get the adamantium?  Well, Marvel does have some, and since

Magneto pulled the bit that was bonded to Wolverine, well they have a little
surplus.  But thanks to a mini-camera and some photos, they were kind enough
to let go of some for a low price.

eep.  Who?

Now, now.  That was part of the deal to get rid of those mercenaries that
were after Harvey Griffin.  I can't tell.

"Nightstorm" for Sam.
"Dawn" and "Dusk" for the dogs?

I like the names for the dogs!  And I'm considering that name for Sam.

Susie:"When life gives you a lemon, make lemonade."
Calvin:_I_ say, when life gives you a lemon, wing it right back and add a 
few lemons of your own.

Please no more lemons...I read enough 'fics with bad characterization as it

is.
That wasn't a reference to lemon fics!!!  That was a quote by Calvin from
Calvin and Hobbes!!  It was suppose to be funny!  I'll put the whole strip at
the end so you can see that it doesn't mean lemon fics.

Zen suggested some nice cities for my characters to start in.  Maybe I'll use
Kyoto, or Kobe.  Depends, they're already finishing a job before they get the
one to take care of Ranma and Akane.

Now about the title.  You see my fanfic is probably a pretty nice story about
three guys who come to Nerima to capture Akane and Ranma.  Pretty simple idea
I know, but it does get a little better.  Also, it basically riddled with
jokes (wether they're good jokes is still debatable).  You see, when I write
something, It's usually a comedy.  Even if it's not a comedy, I add comedy.
 I believe laughter is the best medcine, let a smile be your umbrella, and
all those other stupid sayings I could bore you with if I wanted you to fall
asleep reading this.  Anyway, if I don't get at least a chuckle from you, I
say I didn't write a good story.  So I'll keep taking suggestions on the
name, names for the title, and for the Last name (I don't know about Smith,
and Bond seems to obvious).  Thanks for any and all help, and, of course,
I'll give you credit if I use any of your ideas.

Jordan E. Sam (who is now getting the FFML on juno, so use that address)
JesX@aol.com
jesx@juno.com
All around bad speller (and my grammer ain't no good neither :))
Comic, Cartoon, Gaming, and TV fan who knows WAY too much useless trivia and
Co-founder and Sorta-leader of the Comic Trivia Group,
"If you have an AOL account, you may already be a member!"
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Susie:Hi, Calvin.  Have you started your leaf collection yet?
Calvin:I've been visualizing the conceptualization process.  That's the hard
part.
Susie: I'M almost done.  Isn't it fun?  It's like a treasure hunt!
Calvin:A treasure hunt?!?  Are you crazy??  This is a stupid, boring,
time-wasting forced assignment!  This isn't fun!
Susie:"When life gives you a lemon, make lemonade."
Calvin:_I_ say, when life gives you a lemon, wing it right back and add some
lemons of your own!
------It's a Magical World, the last :( Calvin and Hobbes collection
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