Subject: [C&C]Slashtooth's Semi Daily Reviews!
From: Slashtooth@evnet.com
Date: 9/29/1996, 2:05 AM
To: Fanfic@fanfic.com

Well, here we are again.  It has been a while, and our Fanfic directory
is bursting with Fanfics to C&C.  So, here we go.  Please remember that
many Fanfics have been saved to disk, some responded to privatly, and
some, well, lost.  This is done my my mail programs idea of Alphabetical
sorting, so your Fanfic may still be buried.  Sorry.

Onca again, Ridgewolfe is busy working my old job, so he hasn't had time
to write, let alone enjoy his new system upgrades, so I will be C&Cing
the fics alone again.

First, Sailor Phone and the CCC, Chapter 1.  Hmmm... Actually, I think I
will wait for a couple of more parts before C&Cing this one.  Need more
story.  :)  Keep it coming, though.

Next, Snipes in Wonderland.  I have a particular view on this one,
seeing as I was a pit snipe for our Light off Examination in the Navy. 
First thing I noticed, don't try to type with a german accent.  Use a
couple of german words, and then type it in english.  Readers will
usually infer the accent.  As for the representation of an engine room
crew.  Excellent work.  I could see it, mainly because I have lived it,
but you did a great job capturing 'Engine Room' conversation.  The
Battlestations response was also accurate, and the engineers attitude of
'If it works, Use it, If it doesn't, Push it till it does, And if it
breaks, It needed fixing anyway' was perfect.  Waiting for the rest of
this series.

Next, the Bitlet Story that so far has been put together by several
people.  Under The hammer.  So far, I love it.  Classic.  Hope someone
actually puts this together as a story.

Next, The Visit.  Another Darkfic.  Oiy, they seem to be coming almost
regularly now.  Not really dark, this one, but depressing.  Hmmm.... New
Classification... Depressfic.  Not suprised, though, that it took Jail
to straighten Ranma out...  This one gets filed for reading on those
days when I think nothing could be worse.

Next in the folder, The Heart of the Matter.  A Tenchi Muyu Fanfic.  I
have not been able to aquire many episodes of this to watch (Money being
the #1 reason), but it was an interesting look into what would happen if
Tenchi ever made a decision.  Although I had a bit of trouble with the
fact they didn't even notice that he was dead, there may have been a
precident set in the series.  Not bad, but it would be a lot better if
it was fleshed out a bunch, everybody's reaction to the 'New and
Improved' Tenchi, so on and so forth.

OKay.  Panzer Dragoon is sitting here, all the parts of it mocking me to
put it together into a readable story, so I am gonna stop here. 
Hopefully my new job schedule will be steady, so I can continue to C&C. 
Have a good one all, and remember, we try to C&C everything, so keep 'em
coming!

-- Slashtooth@evnet.com "Chew 'em up and Spit 'em out, That's what Fanfics are all about!" Reviewer at large. Author at small.