Subject: Re: Al'Thor's TIL Comments
From: Sebastian Weinberg
Date: 9/26/1996, 1:46 PM
To: Fanfic Mailing List


On Wed, 25 Sep 1996, Richard Lawson wrote:

: So Nodoka was pretty much reduced to a plot device, the catalyst for all
: the major events in Ranma and Akane's lives.  Again, I never considered
: how bad a person this made her out to be.  I'll have to think about
: that.  I fear there's not much I can do, for to change her would be to
: replot much of the story.  Maybe I can add a bit that makes Nodoka more
: likeable.  <sigh>  I had sworn that "Life's Ingredients" was my last TIL
: story, but maybe I need one more side story about Nodoka and Genma.  I
: mention that she and Genma go shopping together; perhaps that would be a
: good setting for the story.

Sounds fun.  :)

To console you a bit, I didn't think that Nodoka came across as
*that* evil in _TIL_.  She had her faults, like her eagerness to
"resolve" Ranma and Akane's relationship, but that's what humans
are about, isn't it?


: So I wrote an aftermath story called "The Dying of the Rose".  This
: deals with Kodachi's release from the hospital eight years after she was
: committed.  She's more or less sane, and has to find a place for herself
: in the Ranmaverse.  The story was a bit of a catharsis for me;
: afterwards, I found myself *liking* Kodachi, even in her manga, maniacal
: form.  Once you get inside someone's head, you tend to understand them a
: bit better.  :)  "The Dying of the Rose" happens to be one of my
: favorite works, because of that.

It's one of mine, too.  I love it.


: Well, the point to the spatula was that she no longer uses violence to
: solve her problems, like she did occasionally in the manga.  It is also
: symbolic of how she's given up on Ranma.  Her obsession with him, in one
: form or the other, was the central theme of her life for so long.  Those
: are the things I tried to resolve with Ukyo, and I thought I'd done
: that.  What "Life's Ingredients" is supposed to be about if Ukyo trying
: to fill the void left by the departure of her obsession over Ranma.  She
: thought she could do it by throwing herself into her business (which is
: why she felt so good at the end of TIL), but it isn't working out the
: way she expected.

Which is exactly the way I read it, so it can't have been *that*
unclear.  (On the other hand, that might be the mindlink playing up
again :)


: Again, I happen to agree with you.  Part of what "Life's Ingredients"
: was supposed to show was why it was a mistake for them to marry so young
: - they both still need a bit of maturing.  Still, like I said,
: resolution to Ranma 1/2 meant, to me, Ranma and Akane married.  I was
: certainly disappointed that RT brought us to the brink of marriage and
: then backed away.  TIL was my answer to that, fulfilling some fan's
: needs (including my own) to see the ultimate consummation of Ranma's and
: Akane's relationship.

Well, ptoo on you!  I happen to *love* Takahashi-sama's ending -
it's the *only* ending it could have had.  Ranma and Akane really
couldn't marry (and their age is only one of many factors, why),
but she needed to show that *sometime* it was going to happen -
only not right now.

The story ended openly, telling us as the readers that these kids
are going to continue having adventures and crazyness filling their
life.  I'm *glad* it ended that way, and not with a cheesy, forced
"conclusion".

:P


Sebastian
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