Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] The Nameless Sequel, Ep. 3
From: Sebastian Weinberg
Date: 9/26/1996, 9:47 AM
To: Fanfic Mailing List


On Wed, 25 Sep 1996, Mike W. Loader wrote:

: EPISODE 3 - A Hard Day's Night

: (He pulls out a check. Nabiki jumps over and snatches it from him 
: to examine.)

I'm still trying to determine, whether Nabiki was actually sincere
about her lecture in last episode (What she said certainly made
sense) or if she's just trying to milk Ranma.


: Akane: (skeptically) That's very thoughtful of you, but why on 
: earth Animal Control? You won't last a day!
: 
: Ranma: (bristling) Oh yeah? And why not?
: 
: Akane: Your job is to round up animals, yes?
: 
: Ranma: Yup. Dogs, bears, elephants....
: 
: Akane: Cats....
: 
: Ranma: (turning pale) No, I don't think I'd have to go after cats. I 
: mean, not cats....

Gah!  *Now* it makes sense.  I was wondering how you would bring
Felix into the story, and the new job was puzzling me, but I didn't
make the connection.  D'oh, me STUPID!



: Sasuke: (speaking into a radio) They're both in the kitchen, 
: Mistress. The girl appears to be conducting some sort of 
: chemistry experiment...

A-ha, the Kunous make their move.


: Ranma: (incredulous) Tried it? It was on fire! The bowl was 
: melting! And I didn't like the look of that portal the fumes were 
: forming...
: 
: Akane: (irritated) It was only a tiny portal. And the chanting 
: wasn't _that_ ominous...

Hmm, I dunno whether this is still as funny the second time around.


: (Something clicks in Sasuke's mind.)
: 
: Sasuke: Wait a minute...if they're here, then who's....(fumbles for 
: radio) Mistress! Wait! Stop!

: (They vault through the window, grab each figure, spin them 
: around, and throw the powder in their faces.)
: 
: Kodachi & Kuno: My darl...WHA?
: 
: Figures: AhCHOO!
: 
: (The titanic sneeze blows much of the powder back into Kuno & 
: Kodachi's shocked faces. Both pairs freeze, staring at each other. 
: The stares, however, quickly fade to dreamy expressions of 
: bliss...)

Wheeeee!  Kunou & Nabiki (I *loved* that dig at the Kunou-Nabiki
school of pairing, in the last part), Kodachi & Kasumi!
Waaahahaha!

No, wait:  Kodachi -> Kasumi -> Kunou -> Kodachi!

Yesssss!


: Akane: (laughing) Oh, right. He's really P-chan with a Jusenkyo 
: curse.
: 
: Ukyo: (looking surprised) He is? Boy, that explains a lot. Actually, 
: I'm surprised I didn't figure it out before.
: 
: Akane: I'm joking, Ukyo. Of course he isn't. Right, Ranma?

I can't *wait* 'til she tries that "joke" on Ryouga.

"Isn't that funny, Ryouga-kun?  What are you doing with that tanto
blade?"


: Ukyo: I'll have the waiter bring them. (half-turns in her chair) 
: Tsubasa!
: 
: Chair: Yes?
: 
: (Ukyo gives a strangled yelp, jumps up, and spatulates the chair 
: into the kitchen.)

Um, funny as hell, yes, but can you picture Ukyou taking Tsubasa as
a waiter in her restaurant?


: Ukyo: (grimly) I'm going to kill him one of these days. Ranma, you 
: don't know what it's like having a crossdressing lunatic obsessed 
: with you, constantly doing bizzare things to gain your attention.. 
: ..Akane, why are you giggling?

Bwaaaahahaaaa!  I *love* ironic digs like this.


: (Scene changes to a rather comfortable, if high-tech, room. 
: Around a table sit a rather odd assortment of people; a man in a 
: weatherbeaten black trenchcoat, another man with long black hair 
: and penetrating eyes, a robed girl with a mallet and a queer mark 
: on her forehead, a half cat/half something girl, and a grinning 
: fellow in a black uniform and cloak.)

In-joke alert!  :)


: Ranma: (turning) You washed it? Why didn't Kasumi...
: 
: Nabiki: We haven't seen her today. I think she went off early this 
: morning to buy food.

Or chasing after someone.

K: "Oh, Kodachi darling..."

K: "Leave me alone, wench!  Tatewaki, brother, love, don't you see
    we are pefect for each other?  We even live together already."
K: "Oh, Akane, Kasumi and the Pigtail Girl!  How can I ever choose?
    I will date all thre of you!!"

Um, sorry. Getting carried away.

Anyway, I loved this.  Again.  As ususal.  More.


Sebastian
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