Nice start on what look's like could be an intresting fic. Not exactly 
the type of BGC crossover I would of expected, but it does look like it's 
going to be good. I espically like the way you've handled Priss in this, making 
her a pilot add's more to her mysterious past, and hoepfully you shed some
light on this and on how she came to work for NERV. 

I also like the Genom/KS alliance, albeit short. I would love to see a
falshback though to how they decided to work togther and how the final battle 
went. I also think Genom is probably still around some where, with Quincy 
still churning out Boomers (or maybe even controlling NERV) and I think the 
other KS are out there somewhere. Hopefully you'll look at these issues in
future chapters, but as of right now you have a good start to what looks like 
a good fic..

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien
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Mizuno Ami-chan forever!!!