Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF] Life's Ingredients - Thy Inward Love : Aftermath
From: Adam Barnes
Date: 9/25/1996, 6:48 PM
To: sterman@sprynet.com
CC: Nightelf <nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu>, Fanfic Mailing List <fanfic@fanfic.com>
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Adam_Barnes@bc.sympatico.ca

Richard Lawson wrote:

Nightelf wrote:

Hmmm.

I had a real problem with the "one-night stand" between Ranma and Ukyou.
I have a difficult time accepting all the little coincidences - both of
them being too out of it to realize who they're doing it with, Ranma
getting kicked out of the house, only to end up at Ucchan's rather than
elsewhere, etc.  Problem is, since this act sets the stage for the rest
of the story, it tends to put a taint on the rest of the work.

Er... You do realize that nothing happened, don't you?  They didn't have
sex - Ranma was just so hard up (so to speak) that he had a dream about
having sex with Akane, and when he woke up next to Ukyo, he thought he'd
done it with her.

I think you need to make that clearer. I wasn't sure myself.

You also mention when Ukyo finds Ranma in the cave, that he is in girl
form, and Ukyo thinks this is strange because she didn't think it had
been raining. So why WAS Ranma in girl form?

"Where are we going?"
"Where they went."
"Well what if they went nowhere?!"
"Then this will be your big chance to get away from it all!"

Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan.

Alpha C.