On Mon, 23 Sep 1996 22:20:32 -0400 Suds-kun wrote:

: Ranma 1/2 Fan Fiction
: "This Little Piggy"

Hmmm.  This still needed something, to make it a good darkfic.  As
Nightelf correctly pointed out, Ranma is not really himself
anymore during this story, and perhaps you should make a *point*
of that.  Go with Kun-chan's excellent suggestion:  Ranma - the
*real* Ranma, as we know him - died together with Akane.  The only
thing left was his need for revenge, inhabiting his body.  And when
it had run its course, Ranma's body just... stopped.


Sebastian
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