On Mon, 23 Sep 1996 20:33:36 -0400 Suds-kun <suds1964@tir.com> writes:

For your review and consumption.  An attempt to write a humorous fan
fiction.  Upon ingestion of this fic, please return your review by
placing an 'X' in the appropriate space.

My review:  ___ Funny

           ___ Not Funny

           ___ Suds-kun writes good darkfics

           ___ I'm PISSED! (tm White Wolf)

           _X_ Other: __It was_okay,_but_semi_predictable___________



Ranma woke up and rubbed his eyes.  He looked around and noticed his
father must have already got up.  Ranma stood up and stretched, then
dressed.  Ranma opened the door and took a step onto a piece of wood.
His reflexes took over before he thought.  He jumped to his left and
narrowly missed the bucket of water.  As Ranma watched the bucket
swing backwards, he noticed a note on the bucket. "Don't look up"
read the note.  Ranma looked up and saw a big sign that said
"SUCKER!"

If he wanted to be feathered, could he just do it manually instead of
setting a trap for himself?  Surely it wasn't for his father, otherwise
he wouldn't have set a double explosion for the go board.

Ranma made his way down the stairs as the number of people laughing
increased.  He looked at Akane as she lay on the floor laughing,
tears streaming from her eyes.  Nabiki, too, was laughing
uncontrollably.  Their combined laughter would have been the envy of
Kuno Kodachi.  Even Kasumi was giggling.

"Stop it!  This ain't funny!" Shouted Ranma as he waved his arms.
Some of the feathers and sticky goo flew off and landed on the floor
with a splat.

He must have had quite a time doing this with a straight face.

"I got you all!" He laughed.

It wasn't hysterically funny, but I laughed.


Ranma-k Saotome
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