On Fri, 20 Sep 1996, Scott Jamison wrote:
On Fri, 20 Sep 1996, Terrence M Marks wrote:
She's really tough to write for the reason you mention below.
Overall, I like it. Not goign to do a line-by-line on it.
I don't think that Kodachi is *that* crazy. But anything less
would ruin the fic. Keep it.
Well, she may not be that crazy *now* (though this is
debatable.) This future assumes she gets worse rather than better.
I notice that the futures are getting progressively worse for
Ranma (Wife, family, and friends killed in part 2; Stuffed and mounted by
a psychopath in part 3). I am almost dreading what you are going to
subject Ukyo and Akane to.
On top of that, are you planning on any follow-up (I'm sure
Kodachi's going to _run_ to the psychyatrist after seeing what her future
holds)?
HTG