Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] Deep Reflections 3/5
From: Harvey Torrance Griffin
Date: 9/21/1996, 12:58 PM
To: Scott Jamison
CC: Terrence M Marks <normal@grove.ufl.edu>, fanfic@fanfic.com

On Fri, 20 Sep 1996, Scott Jamison wrote:
On Fri, 20 Sep 1996, Terrence M Marks wrote:
	She's really tough to write for the reason you mention below.
Overall, I like it.  Not goign to do a line-by-line on it.
I don't think that Kodachi is *that* crazy.  But anything less
would ruin the fic.  Keep it.

	Well, she may not be that crazy *now* (though this is 
debatable.)  This future assumes she gets worse rather than better.
	I notice that the futures are getting progressively worse for 
Ranma (Wife, family, and friends killed in part 2; Stuffed and mounted by 
a psychopath in part 3).  I am almost dreading what you are going to 
subject Ukyo and Akane to.
	On top of that, are you planning on any follow-up (I'm sure 
Kodachi's going to _run_ to the psychyatrist after seeing what her future 
holds)?

HTG