An interesting what-if tale. :) The characters stay mostly IC, with a
few exceptions, and the plot is well-structured.
   My biggest fault with the story was the reluctance of Ranma and Co. to
tell Kasumi that P-chan was really Ryoga. I doubt it would upset Kasumi;
for that matter, I almost doubt Kasumi can be upset. A "Oh my!" would
probably be the extent of it.
   Will be looking forward to the next installments.

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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