On  Wed, 18 Sep 1996 23:54:14  raphael@asu.edu said:

Well... I don't really know how much of a deal Kasumi would make out 
of it if she found out. She's generally a forgiving person, and it *was* 
an honest mistake. The stigma of "She can't find out I'm P-Chan" lacks 
the original punch it did.

It isn't really Kasumi they're worried about, it's Souun.

Wow...she managed to take off the five bazillion bandannas from Ryoga? :P

She did it in the original episode and the manga, so....

Where'd the scrapes come from? From people landing on him, I guess? 

Mostly from his face hitting the ice, like in the original story.

Interesting. I guess Akane will be challenging Kodachi, then

No. That arc has been cut from this version. Kodachi will be showing up in
chapter 5 under different circumstances.

Hey, Ranma isn't *that* good yet! Mikado is *definitely* better than 

Ranma's a bit better skater than in the manga. Looking at my copy, I see
that a few lines got lost when I converted from Word. The basic jist was
that, yes, Ranma was hit many times, yes, he was hurt, but not as badly
as Mikado.

brackets around this line would be good, and you could make the line 
sound more malicious, too (hey, she *does* want to kill him and all!)

Oh? Who said she wants to KILL him? The Amazon Laws here are slightly
different (okay, maybe really different).

Well, I'm off to work on chapter 4. Coming soon: Nabiki and Ryouga argue,
Ranma takes a short flight, Shampoo arrives, and RYOUGA! beats Shampoo?
But not necessarily in that order :)
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