On Wed, 18 Sep 1996 22:08:38 -0700 (PDT) Paul G Harrison said:

: ALTERNATIONS Chapter 3
: 
: A Day at the Rink

*Highly* interesting.  I had almost expected them to solve the
Golden Pair problem in a sensible and rational way, but it's good
to see, that not *everyone* in your fic has become sapient.  :)

I am intrigued by the way you treat the collar as dangerous to
Ryouga.  I have always thought the same, and in fact, there is an
almost-strangulation scene in the Golden Pair episodes of my own
fic series _Ranko 1/2_.

Nabiki's characterization gets better and better.  Thanks for
that.  I really like Nabiki.

Oh, and I'm looking forward to the amazon we've seen foreshadowed
in the last paragraph.  :)


Sebastian
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