OK, I've lost the e-mail addy of Greg, so I'm gonna send this to
the list. New Horizons is turning out really interesting, and
so I was looking forward to --
<But, Sean!>
*sigh*...yes?
<Isn't it an author fic? You hate those!>
Yes, I know Greg said it was an author fic, but it doesn't count
because the main character isn't named Greg Sandborn, therefore my
biggest objection is gone.
<Yeah, but he's a powerful ninja, and he falls in love with Nabiki,
all the cliches...>
I know, but there's a lot of emotional depth to the relationship
that's missing in other fics. We see *why* Nabiki falls in love
with him.
<But-->
Go away! Anyway, 3A was excellent. Hopefully Jeff will wake up in
time to be at the cave, I think it would be a mistake to have him
miss the confrontation. Like the Kasumi-Tofu bit, looking forward
to a little more with Ranma and Akane in 3b.
Watch out for old teacher sacrificing himself so that the young clan
might live on together in the spirit of unity and brotherhood-type
plots.
Next.
--Sean Gaffney
--seeing the light at the end of the tunnel with Honeymoon...