She sat on a stool and sighed again. How would he react? 
Would he still love her? After all, she was the major reason for the 
cause of this. Shampoo looked at her belly button and rubbed it gently. 
With Jack leaving in a few days, she would not have many chances left 
to tell him.

eep. that would suck at 16.... O_O

Also, how the heck would she know ???? Girls only start to realize they are
preggers after about 4-6 weeks... (that is when you start to get morning
sickness, sore breasts, etc.) I don't think that much time has passed... 

I guess that I was getting 
stressed out from having a boring job and that the fact that I was 
leaving Nerima in a few days. The emotions caused me lost sleep, 
which caused me to be grumpy.

exactly what happened to me this summer...

	I was so excited and happy that I woke up at 6, before 

everyone else except Kasumi, the ever-ready cook. She must run on 
Energizer batteries over the night while in the kitchen. Heh, I wouldn't 
have mind seeing her use some batteries for something else sometime.

huh ?

	"Don't call me nuts! I'm not nuts! I'm perfectly sane!" I 
exclaimed. I grabbed her wrists and spun her around, pressing her 
stomach and wrists against the wall.

did you steal this scene from me ? ^_^

	"Oh, I got it from my ancestors," he answered. "Now, let's see 
how good your dodging skills are! On guard!" Jack charged in and 

"En garde!"

	"I've been waiting for his day," Dan pointed at Ryouga.

his=this ?

	"Fight me fairly, no more tricks!" Mouse demanded.

Mouse=Mousse ^_^

	Kasumi stopped cooking and peeked at the flash outside the 
window. It was so bright, it hurt her eyes, "Oh my!"

hehe nice tension breaker

OK, I need some help. Who do you think Urd would like most: Dan, 
Mike or Jack. I'm not including Hanny in this because I have other 
plans for him.

what about Mike and Ukyou ? ? ?

Not Jack because of Shampoo...

so Dan!! ^_^

So, what did you all think of my fight scenes? I found them a little bit 
boring and lacking some emotion. This part was mostly fight scenes 
and I tried to keep them short. I was going to put in a Nodoka and Jack 
sword fight scene but I didn't want to drag the story too long.

actually, it was very well done...

The sex-related parts were... disturbing?

Just some info for ya. I went on the net and checked out who the Four 
Horsemen really are. I sorta knew they were in the bible but I wasn't 
too sure. Well, I found out that they are in the bible, Revelations 6:10 I 
think. How did I find myself using this name, you ask. Well, I get a lot 

Interesting.

of my idea from watching professional wrestling. You'll see that a lot in 
the next few parts of you watch WCW or WWF.

Not so interesting ^_^


very well done!

off I go to read part 12...


hugs!

misachan
Marisa Price
marisa@value.net
http://value.net/~marisa/