Subject: Re: [FFML] [LEMON] Ranma 1/2: A Real Man
From: Marisa Price
Date: 9/18/1996, 4:19 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Ukyou had reverted to her boy-act, speaking in a low, gravelly 
voice, challenging all the guys in the room to tests of 
strength, and pinching Azusa's ass.  Mousse cowered in a 
corner, crying for his mother to come and make the monsters go 
away.  Ryouga crawled around on all fours, grunting and 
squealing and eating whatever spilled on the floor.  Shampoo 
lost her accent and spoke impeccable Japanese.  But Akane's 
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reaction was by far the most surprising.

whahahahahha

snicker

I wanted to do the upright and noble thing, but all Akane's 
attentions had Little Ranma standing at attention and somehow, 
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whahahhahahah



And let out a long and heavy breath.  I still couldn't believe 
what I had done: the right thing.  I was filled with pride and 
the sense that I had finally grown up and was worthy of calling 
myself a man.  Lost in my self-congratulatory reverie, I 
wandered down the hall.  Before I realized what I was doing, I 
was at Kasumi's door.

I was still hard from Akane's come-ons and had come to 
oneechan's room out of habit, seeking instant, sweet relief.  
Just as I was about to turn the doorknob, I stopped.

No more. 

I'm a real man now.

I went to my room, undressed, and hit the floor. Just before I 
fell asleep, a taunt echoed in my head:

Just you wait, Akane.  The honeymoon is gonna blow you away.


Hmm... I didn't see where you were gonna go with this... and I was prepared
to dislike the story after reading it, but the ending is GREAT. You did a
wonderful job with this lemon, a real creative project.

I actually liked it :)

misa
Marisa Price
marisa@value.net
http://value.net/~marisa/