Hmmm... not too bad... But you've got Akane acting all wrong... When Ranma
went off after Herb and that, she was worried about him and the first thing
she did when he came back (besides yell at him about how worried she'd been)
was to hug him. Akane isn't happy when Ranma leaves, and doesn't exactly
act happy, either...

Other than that, it's not bad. ^_^

Kun-chan...