the first one was funny, i laughed my head off through
the entire thing.  this one was kinda boring, though.
a few lines were entertaining, but it didn't have the
hard-hitting humor of A Real Man part 1.  (still laughing
about "he'll never forgive me for poking his sister"). ^_^

you should have used prose format and should have had a
real story...this seemed more like a dialogue description
of a solitary moment in time.  blah.

signed, pnt
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rugged rhymesters, crooked crimesters, dime droppers, 25-to-lifers,
back stabbers, low-blowers, illegal cocaine growers, starvation,
profanity, anxiety, brothers tryin' me, gun slingers, dead ringers
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