: > : How about making a real ending? That is rather ... pathetic.
: > Um, Kun-chan... This is *part 1*.  You're right that the ending of
: > this part was rather abrupt, but it doesn't need a *real* ending,
: > because there is more to come.
: Yes, but my fics are also part 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 and 7 ... If I ended my
: parts like that, people probably wouldn't bother with the next one...
: Maybe if it had 'part 1a' and '1b', so you can be sure that that's not
: *THE* ending for that whole fic, one could excuse it ... but it's rather
: pathetic as it stands ... It looks *just* like 'oh, the sex is over. 
: Who'd want to read a read ending? I should write the next part for more
: sex' or something... ^^;;;
OK, can see that.  I misread you message, sorry.

That's okay. ^_^  The ending could be improved dramatically, just to make
that single part rounded off, at least... hmmm... I suddenly thought of
an analogy for how that fic read, and the ending fitted in perfectly...
but I don't think I should say it here. :p

Sebastian (Duh, I should have known - she's *always* right)

*grin* But of course... ^_^

Kun-chan...