On Fri, 13 Sep 1996, The Queen of Ranma Lemons wrote:
: Umm... there's not much I can say about this, other than:
:
: How about making a real ending? That is rather ... pathetic.
:
: At the moment it looks like you've said, "Hmm, the sex it over. Let's
: close it up ASAP - I can't be bothered any more." And you chucked in
: the above, and sent it out. That rather spoiled the whole thing. If
: you'd have put an ending like the setting up, although it's just a lemon
: and there wasn't exactly much setting up, it would have been better than
: *that* ending...
Um, Kun-chan... This is *part 1*. You're right that the ending of
this part was rather abrupt, but it doesn't need a *real* ending,
because there is more to come.
Sebastian