NABIKI - NEW HORIZONS PART 1 A MATCH MADE ON WALL STREET
by Uncle Fester (Greg Sandborn?)
*Grammar: 8
*Story: 7  Yeah, it looked like another horibble author is story fic, but it
lost that near the end.  Also, although he used the cliched "Kasumi -
motherly role, Nabiki - fiancial role, and Akane - carry on dojo role after
mom dies,"  but it was still effective I thought.
*Characters: 8  he portrayed them nicely and realisticly
*Humor: 2 a few funny scenes... (very few)
*Drama: 5
*Overall: 7.8  It was sooo slow in the beginning, I had to force myself to
read the rest of it, but fortunately it got better.  I figured the beginning
was to introduce the character Jeff, oh well, nice job.

HALF - WAY HARE
By Travis Butler
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 6 an okay crossover nothing special I saw...
*Characters:  7 they were true to the orginal, I thought the guide spoke
Chinese..
*Humor: 4  If this had humor... overused cliched humor is more like it.
*Overall:  6.9  Of course, this is the alpha version... it wasn't even
finished.  Ummm, can't think of any suggestions on how to finish. sorry.  

A RANMA 1/2 FANFIC REVENGE
by Slashtooth
*Grammar: 8
*Story: 7 It had an interesting plot...
*Characters: 7 
*Overall: 6  You said this isn't really a dark fic, you're right.  It ended
too sweetly, if I wrote it, it would be completely different.  But you are
not me and I am not you so oh well.  It was short, I think it could have
been a little longer at the resloution.  Just a thought.




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"They love least that let them know their love, may say no to that
which they would have contrived I... I follow my love, into the
depth of hell itseeeeelllf!!"  -Kuno Tatewaki (Ranma 1/2 Movie one)
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