I give you full marks for figuring out a plausible reason for Ranma to
stay female if she becomes pregnant.  I think it works well.  Ranma's
female body just can't become male while pregnant.  I don't like that you
had Ryouga rape Ranma.  No matter how peeved Ryouga is, there is just no
way Ranma would allow that to happen.  And if for some reason he did, he
sure as hell wouldn't sit back and watch as Ryouga raped Akane.  He'd have
to be dead, and even then he'd probably find a way to stop it.  But that's
just my opinion.  Aside from that it was well done.  I love the scene
where Ranma and Akane are trying to out birth each other.  Truly classic.

Ja ne!

Ranchan

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Lucas "Ranchan" Muzzatti
Science student at Univertity of Toronto     LONG LIVE AZUSA SHIRATORI!! 
E0FQ7Z7A@credit.erin.utoronto.ca (school)                  
Ranchan@mail.accent.net (home)

             High priest of the church of Azusa:  keeper of kawaii
                   and writer of the commandements of Kawaii.   
   
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