Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF] The Cycle
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 9/13/1996, 6:17 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

 On Wed, 11 Sep 1996 22:23:12 -0500 (CDT) Greg Sandborn said:

:                         The Cycle

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: I know this story was predictable from the start. 

Not really.

The lack of names and attributions hinted that these characters
were *not* the obvious ones.  Later additions (like the wife not
knowing about the katana's origin) strengthened that suspicion.

So I thought about who *could* this be.  Considering the title, I
thought, that maybe this was a future Scene in which Ranma is
training his own son, but then the father started acting so bloody
crummy, that I thought "No way!"  I never thought that this could
be one generation *before* the one we know about.  D'oh!

Very nice misleading and good plotting.  A serious fic about a
serious subject.
 

Sebastian
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