(takes a moment to compose himself)

Well.  A powerful work.  

Good job.

P.S.  Don't apologize.  Oftentimes, the best work comes from the worst 
feelings within - anger, sadness, depression.  Writing can have a 
cathartic effect, sending our emotions flying onto the paper or the 
computer screen rather than at someone else.  
   
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Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu
"He's so beautiful when he's unconscious."
-Kodachi Kuno, "Kurobara"
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