Subject: Re: ALTERNATIONS chapter 2
From: Paul G Harrison
Date: 9/11/1996, 6:51 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Wed, 11 Sep 1996, Elizabeth Christian wrote:
Please keep writing this story!  I'm really want to see where you'll take
it.  I do have mixed feelings about the story, but I want to know happens next!

Your wish is my command. Chapter 3 is in process, and I have the main plot of 
chapter 4 worked out. Chapter 4 will bring in Shampoo, following a somewhat
DIFFERENT Amazon law :)

The problem I see is that the characters are willing to sit and hear each
other out.  So many problems will be easily solved if they always act

Well, the next chapter will probably be fairly rational as well, except maybe
when Ranma, Akane, and Nabiki find out where Ryouga spent the night. But the
chapter after that should make certain characters a bit more irrational, at
least temporarily.

I'm a raving Kunou fangirl (scary, no?).  I'm kind of put off by Kunou's
reaction to Ranma.  As I understand it, homophobia is much less common in

That's the one part of the story so far that I had trouble with. I knew what
I wanted to do, but I couldn't come up with anything better at the time. I may
in the near future rework that part of the story. Unfortunately, Kunou pobably
won't be making anything more than cameo appearances until chapter 5

Ja ne
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Paul G Harrison <root@pgh.vip.best.com>