Well, here it is.  I hope somebody out there likes this; I didn't
get much of a response on Part 2.  Please send me C&C.  Heck,
I'll even welcome flames with a Kasumi-like expression plastered
on my face, as long as I know somebody is reading this.  ^_^

        I like it, however the scope it encompasses indicates this is going
to be a long one... one of those epic fics I like so much. (When they're
finished)
        The character of the Ice Queen is done well, as is the assistant.
It started to lose me on the Ryouga mental rant, probably because I've seen
it so many times before.  In itself it's fine but perhaps interlacing it
with other aspects of the story might make it more readable.  It's not
really important but softens the focus a bit.
        At the end, Tofu/Genma/Ryouga are chasing Ranma so I assume they're
looking for Tofu's sensei friend.  One note is that Genma and Tofu aren't
really the rooftop type.  The character development is happening rapidly,
so I can only wonder what is left for the rest of the story however long it
happens to be.  Pace yourself if you need to.

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