On Sep 11, 1996 00:58:00, 'Travis Butler <tbutler@tfs.net>' wrote: 
 
[snip] 

 "Liar! Centurians!" Kila shouted. Two glowering Centurians entered  
the room. "Take this spy to the brig!"  

Lyra: Um, I believe you mean Centurions. Centurians would be from Alpha  
Centuari. :) 

 
Then they would be Cantaurians, wouldn't they? Or Centauri... but that's 
Babylon5, not Star Trek.... Gah! my head hurts  ^_^ 
 

And thus, Chapter 6 comes to a close - and Mihoshi is turned  
loose on an unsuspecting Romulan crew  ^_^  

Lyra: Well, *now* do you admit this was justified? 

Windir: <Looking as if he'd bit into a very large lemon> <<Yes, pun  
*intended.*>> Very well. I am forced to admit that it may indeed have  
been justified. Perhaps. 

Frito: Aw, don't be such a sore loser! 

Windir: I *still* believe that the introduction needs to flow more  
naturally from the story. 

 
You mean the introduction of the Romulans? Hmmm... I could work 
on that some (after all, this *is* a rough draft) 
 

Lyra & Frito: <Sigh> 

[Editor's note: Sigh is right. Another one-paragraph quick comment turns  
into a C&C.]  

 
Any C&C is good C&C.... keep it coming! And thanks for taking the time... 
 
Derek